So ladies, how can I improve my profile?

Looks good to me... but you can never have enough pics!
Have fun and good luck!

Change the second pic to your main.

You think? I thought it might be better to have a picture with a smile first..... The whole first impression thing. Hmmm.

I agree changing the photo to the second.. And I wouldn't expect a whole lot from internet dating, it takes awhile to weed through the game players...

Good Luck on your search

Oh, yeah!! The t-shirt photo is hot. The first one makes you look like a patriotic tick.
Welcome and best wishes!!

Ok, tee shirt not smiling photo first... done.

Too bad you don't go for old women!!

Oh and I just finished reading the whole thing.

Last line is definitely TMI DELETE DELETE

OK, you asked for it. I figure specifics would be most valuable to you, and so I took the liberty of pasting your "about", so I can point things out easier. I'm no pro, I just thought it would be a fun thing to try. I'll put mine in caps so you can find them easier.
About American_Fellow
Interests: Harley D., scuba, snow skiing, hunting, fishing
Hey! Hello and thanks for checking me out. (I'd better make this good, huh? LOL) Ok, here goes...ALL GOOD,TAKE OUT THE HEY, ADD...TO THE END OF HERE GOES

About Me

I'm one of those your mother told you to LOOK for, not LOOK OUT for! To those who know me they usually describe me as "the fair one", "the mediator", the "level headed one", things like that.OMIT THINGS LIKE THAT I'm fairly tame and don't break laws, except for an occasional speeding ticket. But be BE AWARE ware of my wild side. I do like to go to rock concerts, travel alot, ride my custom Harley, play pool, scuba dive, lots of things. But I don't get to do them as often as I would like COMMA due to work. But isn't that always the way? I'm always deciding when to vacation in Cozumel or Cancun for scuba diving again. I've been there a few times already. But I'm very seriously tossing around the idea of diving the great barrier reef of Australia at some point. When? Well we'll see.... I took a scuba trip to Venezuela in February 04, it rocked! aLL GOOD STUFF Concerning my particulars, I was born in '67. I'm a big guy. You can't tell my size from my photos but I'm almost 6' tall and weigh in at..... Hey, no fair! You don't tell! LOL Ok, 280 or so. As far as the rest goes physically, all but the hidden treasures are obvious from the pics.NO NO NO ON THE HIDDEN TREASURES SKIP THE WHOLE PHYSICAL STUFF, IT MAKES YOU SOUND TOO PHYSICALLY ORIENTED...INSTEAD, WHAT HAVE YOU SEEN IN YOUR TRAVELS? 8) I'm financially stable (same good job since '88) and emotionally stable (post 1 divorce, in '95). I have one daughter living with her mother in New Mexico, she was born in '93 and she's a sweety.ALL GREAT STUFF Well, that should have given you a glimpse of the "hard to believe he's single" guy. TAKE OUT-NOT MODEST ENOUGH If this profile raised your eyebrow, give me a buzz. I try to answer my email very quickly.... (unlike many others) REMOVE SUGGESTION OF BEING BETTER THAN OTHERS If you're interesting too we may hook up.

About You

I'm looking to make a friend that's also a lover and a companion. If we marry that's great. If not that's great too.THIS SOUNDS SILLY, SKIP THE MARRY TOPIC I am just having a difficult time finding a woman that doesn't play all the games TOO MANY PEOPLE REFER TO GAMES, TAKE IT OUT, SOUNDS LIKE COMPLAINING and can actually be honest and straight forward with people. GOOD, THIS IS SPECIFIC...GAMES MEANS NOTHING I am honest and straight with everyone and I would prefer the same treatment. I'm looking for someone that's nice on the inside, if she's pretty on the outside that's just like having pretty icing on a cake.LEAVE OUT THE WHOLE PRETTY ON THE OUTSIDE ETC. CAKE BIT Personally I enjoy a good cake whether it has great icing or just mediocre icing, so lets talk. That way we can determine the quality of each other's cake.... reviewing the icing comes later. BE SPECIFIC OF WHAT PRETTY ON THE INSIDE MEANS TO YOU

Basically I don't want or need any drama. IF YOU TELL THEM YOU DONT WANT DRAMA, THEY WILL HIDE IT FROM YOU, TAKE IT OUT So just be real and be honest like me TAKE OUT THE LIKE ME WORDS and we'll get along just fine.

**** See ya' *****

An update: I may be sharing too much but I've had a vasectomy. So if getting pregnant is a must I am no longer for you. BAD MOVE BUCKO WE KNOW YOU ARE TRYING TO SAY SEX WILL BE SAFE

How in the world can you surmise to know what he is "trying" to say? Jeesh, give the guy some credit here. IMO, that was a bit harsh.

Well first, I do appreciate the long disection of my profile. You have some valid suggestions. Thanks.

Concerning the bit at the end with the "bucko" comment, that was certainly not my intent. I will rephrase or something. I was simply sharing that I can no longer make babies. Some ladies want to marry a man and make a family and I have taken myself out of that pool of potentials, that's all.

However, it does show me how much I can be misunderstood by someone trying to read between the lines. Believe it or not, I said exactly what I meant and not what you supposed it to be. But thanks none the less for pointing out that it can be taken that way.

The fact that you said NO to more children is enough, we do read those things.

Well, I changed that to undecided/open. I do like kids but can't make any. That was the reason for my no to begin with, not that I disliked kids or anything.