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I am caught somewhere in the middle
between my old life and my new She is the only thing that connects us this small piece of me and you You walked away, you fell in love you left us far behind I try to keep my temper in check and for her sake to you be kind We are nothing more than trophies that you can sit upon some shelf more concerned with what others think about your looks, your talents and wealth Walk away, do not look back I can do it on my own Raise this gift from God above until she is full grown One day you will finally turn around and then she will be gone Nothing from you will she want for it was you alone that broke that bond And as for me, I will too be gone living my life on my own You gave it all away when you left Your wife, your child and your home. |
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powerful and real |
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Very nice. Sad.
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You have a lovely way in writing
If you are not already a member have a look at the site... http://allpoetry.com I feel your work will find many readers, there too one can involve self in contest, to win points/trophies, or hold contests... |
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You have a lovely way in writing If you are not already a member have a look at the site... http://allpoetry.com I feel your work will find many readers, there too one can involve self in contest, to win points/trophies, or hold contests... Thank you. I will check it out. And also, I appreciate your insight. |
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And S!ow, Sully, 2kidsMom and Dro, thank you very much for letting me vent.
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very nice!!!
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Excellent!
Nice opening and close. |
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Very touching
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Thank you, all
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Great write.
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Wow so deep...and so full of truth.
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You have a lovely way in writing If you are not already a member have a look at the site... http://allpoetry.com I feel your work will find many readers, there too one can involve self in contest, to win points/trophies, or hold contests... Thank you for the advice - it is a lovely site and I opened an account today. Maybe I can post everything together. It will be nice to read everything under one "roof" so to speak and reflect on my reflections. |
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You write poetry really well. The poem itself is sad and happens to so many of us.
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You write poetry really well. The poem itself is sad and happens to so many of us. Thank you. I agree - I was pretty sad when I wrote it. But it worked, I felt much better after getting it down on paper. |
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full of emotion and wonderfully written
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