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Following Me….
M.E. Martin Sadness is following me today like wisps of smoke I can smell the scent of it in the air and feel its cold heat Tears run like raindrops down my face chasing one another Like footsteps across the terrain of my soul I am blinded by a sorrow I can’t seem to shake I feel bleak tired and my mind can’t find its peaceful center My heart feels heavy within my chest And I ache with longing for what I miss I miss the call of your soul to mine The connection of love that’s now elusive The touch of soothing hands The beat of a heart now gone I miss the sound of your voice Your whispers in the dark Your shout of release Your sigh of contentment I miss your eyes that spoke to me from across a room The look of love that stirred my inner most desires The wordless communication that we shared The expression of satisfaction that’s lost to me now I feel so restless and out of place The space by my side is so empty You’re gone and time has slowed to a standstill My arms are empty with no one to hold Sadness is following me today…. |
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that poem was soo amazinq! love it...
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Awesome write...wow....so poignant
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very, very nice
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Edited by
MzEm
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Tue 03/31/09 09:17 AM
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@Blanca: Thank you very much! I am so glad you liked it
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Edited by
MzEm
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Tue 03/31/09 09:26 AM
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@Angel: Thank you for the positive words, makes me glad I wrote down what I was feeling...
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@PKD: Thank you for the kind words....
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Very good write
A+++ Thank you for sharing, I hope to see more |
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@RawB----Another A++++! Thank you for the kind words!
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@LAMom----Thanks for the positive strokes...
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