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Be yourself
I'll do the same I'm fluid diamonds falling like rain Cleansing the earth Healing a tear Compassion my guide Challenging fear I run in the sun A child sublime Universe tells me the world is mine Love is my reason Love is my essence Let's sit together bathing in Presence Be yourself I'll do the same We're fluid diamonds falling like rain... ~© JDS 03/22/2009~ |
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Fabulous...
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Fabulous... TY Ainjel! Have a great day |
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Wow...Great
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Wow...Great Ty Meki Appreciate your comment.... |
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..... " FALLING LIKE RAIN ".....
LOVE the sound of those words...catchy phrase...stands out...grabs at ya... Lovely poem ,btw..also!! |
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that made me wanna get up and do dishes... thank you for you cheeriness not sure that is a word but for you it should be..
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Loved it, "fluid diamonds" has an absolutely beautiful visual for me.
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In the song lyrics of Amanda Marshall
"Let it rain Let it rain on me" |
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this Angel
Metrics with Class. This reminds me of one of my favorite poems I wrote last year. I write very few metrics. Reason is it's really hard for me to love something that almost feels as if it was forced together. It takes something special for me to find one I love because it really has to make me forget what it is to appreciate it. Otherwise it feels like someone has a bunch of words they want to rhyme together where the thought of what is going to be said feels secondary to what rhymes good. uh oh, lol |
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..... " FALLING LIKE RAIN "..... LOVE the sound of those words...catchy phrase...stands out...grabs at ya... Lovely poem ,btw..also!! Thank You MorningSong ....Nice to meet you. Great username |
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that made me wanna get up and do dishes... thank you for you cheeriness not sure that is a word but for you it should be.. that just made me smile....ty! |
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Loved it, "fluid diamonds" has an absolutely beautiful visual for me. I'm glad about that Dave. Thanks for reading and commenting |
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In the song lyrics of Amanda Marshall "Let it rain Let it rain on me" I love the imagery and sound of rain. Thanks for sharing that little ditty (((AG))) |
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Beautifully written, great read
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this Angel Metrics with Class. This reminds me of one of my favorite poems I wrote last year. I write very few metrics. Reason is it's really hard for me to love something that almost feels as if it was forced together. It takes something special for me to find one I love because it really has to make me forget what it is to appreciate it. Otherwise it feels like someone has a bunch of words they want to rhyme together where the thought of what is going to be said feels secondary to what rhymes good. uh oh, lol Sweet J...I get your meaning...no "uh oh" needed lolll Thanks for reading and commenting |
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In the song lyrics of Amanda Marshall "Let it rain Let it rain on me" I love the imagery and sound of rain. Thanks for sharing that little ditty (((AG))) Love the new pic (((Angel))) |
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Beautifully written, great read Hi meg...I've seen you around, but have not formally met you. It's nice to meet you. Thanks for stopping in |
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In the song lyrics of Amanda Marshall "Let it rain Let it rain on me" I love the imagery and sound of rain. Thanks for sharing that little ditty (((AG))) Love the new pic (((Angel))) Thanks Sweetie! |
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My umbrella is upside down..
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