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Topic: Falling Like Rain
AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 03:45 AM
Be yourself
I'll do the same
I'm fluid diamonds
falling like rain

Cleansing the earth
Healing a tear
Compassion my guide
Challenging fear

I run in the sun
A child sublime
Universe tells me
the world is mine

Love is my reason
Love is my essence
Let's sit together
bathing in Presence

Be yourself
I'll do the same
We're fluid diamonds
falling like rain...

~© JDS 03/22/2009~


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Mon 03/30/09 03:48 AM
Fabulous...flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 03:56 AM

Fabulous...flowerforyou




TY Ainjel! Have a great day :heart:

mekikis's photo
Mon 03/30/09 04:49 AM
Wow...Great:smile:

AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 04:56 AM

Wow...Great:smile:




Ty Meki :smile: flowerforyou Appreciate your comment....

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Mon 03/30/09 05:00 AM
..... " FALLING LIKE RAIN ".....

LOVE the sound of those words...catchy phrase...stands out...grabs at ya...drinker

Lovely poem ,btw..also!!flowerforyou:heart:flowerforyou

moonlight_ride62's photo
Mon 03/30/09 05:07 AM
that made me wanna get up and do dishes...flowerforyou thank you for you cheeriness not sure that is a word but for you it should be..

DaveyB's photo
Mon 03/30/09 08:42 AM
Loved it, "fluid diamonds" has an absolutely beautiful visual for me.

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 03/30/09 10:36 AM
In the song lyrics of Amanda Marshall


"Let it rain
Let it rain on me"

:heart:


d4tc's photo
Mon 03/30/09 11:07 AM
:heart: this Angel

Metrics with Class.

This reminds me of one of my favorite poems I wrote last year.
I write very few metrics. Reason is it's really hard for me to love something that almost feels as if it was forced together. It takes something special for me to find one I love because it really has to make me forget what it is to appreciate it. Otherwise it feels like someone has a bunch of words they want to rhyme together where the thought of what is going to be said feels secondary to what rhymes good.

uh oh, lol think


AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:00 PM

..... " FALLING LIKE RAIN ".....

LOVE the sound of those words...catchy phrase...stands out...grabs at ya...drinker

Lovely poem ,btw..also!!flowerforyou:heart:flowerforyou




Thank You MorningSong ....Nice to meet you. Great username flowerforyou


AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:01 PM

that made me wanna get up and do dishes...flowerforyou thank you for you cheeriness not sure that is a word but for you it should be..



:laughing: that just made me smile....ty!

AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:04 PM

Loved it, "fluid diamonds" has an absolutely beautiful visual for me.



I'm glad about that Dave. Thanks for reading and commenting :smile:

AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:08 PM

In the song lyrics of Amanda Marshall


"Let it rain
Let it rain on me"

:heart:







I love the imagery and sound of rain. Thanks for sharing that little ditty (((AG))) :heart:

Meg8771's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:09 PM
Beautifully written, great read flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:10 PM

:heart: this Angel

Metrics with Class.

This reminds me of one of my favorite poems I wrote last year.
I write very few metrics. Reason is it's really hard for me to love something that almost feels as if it was forced together. It takes something special for me to find one I love because it really has to make me forget what it is to appreciate it. Otherwise it feels like someone has a bunch of words they want to rhyme together where the thought of what is going to be said feels secondary to what rhymes good.

uh oh, lol think





:laughing: Sweet J...I get your meaning...no "uh oh" needed lolll
Thanks for reading and commenting biggrin

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:11 PM


In the song lyrics of Amanda Marshall


"Let it rain
Let it rain on me"

:heart:







I love the imagery and sound of rain. Thanks for sharing that little ditty (((AG))) :heart:



Love the new pic (((Angel))) flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:12 PM

Beautifully written, great read flowerforyou




Hi meg...I've seen you around, but have not formally met you. It's nice to meet you. Thanks for stopping in flowerforyou


AngelLight's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:15 PM



In the song lyrics of Amanda Marshall


"Let it rain
Let it rain on me"

:heart:







I love the imagery and sound of rain. Thanks for sharing that little ditty (((AG))) :heart:



Love the new pic (((Angel))) flowerforyou





Thanks Sweetie! :angel:

Sharris's photo
Mon 03/30/09 02:21 PM
My umbrella is upside down..
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