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Topic: Untold
tessa68 Joined Sun 10/01/06 Posts: 1699	Fri 03/27/09 04:26 AM
Now I sit here wishing I could tell what feelings that I want to share. It is killing me because i wanna take you in my arms and hold you tight and let you know it will be alright. These feelings I must tell or I will probably melt 'cause I can't keep these feelings untold.

personalkenja69 Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 6	Fri 03/27/09 05:33 AM
awwwww, i think many of us have felt this way some time or another!! very nice!!

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Fri 03/27/09 05:45 AM
Now I sit here wishing I could tell what feelings that I want to share. It is killing me because i wanna take you in my arms and hold you tight and let you know it will be alright. These feelings I must tell or I will probably melt 'cause I can't keep these feelings untold. Very nice write.

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Fri 03/27/09 06:04 AM
Yup we've all been there at one time or another!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Fri 03/27/09 07:42 AM
Unchained Melody keeps rolling through my mind with this one. This is one of those write's that'll stick in your mind, but you're not sure exactly why......

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 03/27/09 09:24 AM
Your poem is a good beginning... Your thoughts are now "out there." Follow your heart...it will help you to act.

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Fri 03/27/09 09:36 AM


MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 03/27/09 09:58 AM
Now I sit here wishing I could tell what feelings that I want to share. It is killing me because i wanna take you in my arms and hold you tight and let you know it will be alright. These feelings I must tell or I will probably melt 'cause I can't keep these feelings untold. nice

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