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I'd give her my air if I could breathe life through her I'd be her best man with a best man forging a worst man I'd later referee I'd tear down these drapes and escape the windows turning around closing the innuendos I've escaped I'd take this steak unshook seasoning it cook it with highlights saw made shimmering elegance I'd give her that moment capsized in rebelliousness She would love me temporarily going mad behind the scenes Everything would be Grand outside of the schemes |
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I'd give her my air if I could breathe life through her I'd be her best man with a best man forging a worst man I'd later referee I'd tear down these drapes and escape the windows turning around closing the innuendos I've escaped I'd take this steak unshook seasoning it cook it with highlights saw made shimmering elegance I'd give her that moment capsized in rebelliousness She would love me temporarily going mad behind the scenes Everything would be Grand outside of the schemes |
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I like it - and just remembered why I usually don't share my poetry - I'm so not up to par.
I bow to your superior talent. |
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For you, Sweet J
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Beautiful and heartfelt as always J
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I love the flow and your way of painting images. Such richness between the lines ...
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