Topic: Atmosphere
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Tue 03/17/09 06:55 PM
Oh that demon I thought
So long gone and dead
Is trying to raise
Its’ ugly head
Breathing stale
Malevolence my way
Intentions of
Saturating my
Single silver spirit
With a few dark
Spirits of its own…

There’s bad juju
In the air and I don’t
Care to indulge …

Old news cropping up
In my bright shiny future
Dulling my sensibilities
The neon colored
Outtakes I see
When I close my eyes
To visualize my dreams
Clouded
By this negativity
That appears to
Have a death-grip
On my happy-go-lucky
Sensitivity clutching it
By the throat
Choking me to death…

The atmosphere
Suddenly as unpleasant
As an old bottle of
Whiskey gagging me
With the scent
Driving me to
Run
Run
Run away
Away from the place
I’ve worked so damn hard
To get to ….

Well, this simply won’t do …

Feeling like a Christian amongst
Lions holding all the power
Almost tempted to give in
Let them chew and devour
This tired soul
Spit me out
Set me free
From the
Hellacious struggle
My life has
Turned out to be …

Breathing in the
Ominous air
Generated by these
Black-hearted bastards
Consuming me
Drowning me in
Dark depression
I take one last gasp
Of hope …

… and breath deeply…


awh@

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Tue 03/17/09 06:58 PM
Very Nice.
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 03/17/09 07:34 PM
hugs,and breath deeply

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Tue 03/17/09 09:01 PM
Yes...Just breathe....Fantastic write...flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Tue 03/17/09 09:53 PM
Very Moving. Deeply rooted. :banana:
I cannot say one of your bests because
I know I have said that a few times
so I will just say a classic write.
From a classy woman. flowerforyou

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Wed 03/18/09 08:11 AM

Very Nice.
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


Awww thank you 2Kidz! flowerforyou


(((PKH))):heart:



Thank you Ainjel...I have to say, I am rather fond of breathing :heart:


d4....you are such a sweet and lovely human :heart:

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 03/18/09 08:43 AM
Standing by with ... whatever you need lovely ... :heart:


Listen to the niggling in your gut ... you know what to do ... I'm here if you need anything ... truly ...

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 03/18/09 10:34 AM
Few-eeeeeeeeeeeee (ya know, that noise maker horn thingy from New Year's sound). GreAT WRITE!

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Wed 03/18/09 12:50 PM
Expressed with such emotion-breathing in deeply as I take it all in. :heart:

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Wed 03/18/09 07:29 PM
wanna drink ??

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Wed 03/18/09 08:24 PM

Standing by with ... whatever you need lovely ... :heart:


Listen to the niggling in your gut ... you know what to do ... I'm here if you need anything ... truly ...


Thank you precious~I love you~:heart:

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Wed 03/18/09 08:25 PM

Few-eeeeeeeeeeeee (ya know, that noise maker horn thingy from New Year's sound). GreAT WRITE!



Thank you my WonderfulWench~:heart: You always make me smile ~ :heart:

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Wed 03/18/09 08:25 PM

wanna drink ??


Oh I dont think so. Drinking only brings out the "Wild Wizard" in me....bigsmile :heart:

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/19/09 09:26 AM
My Beautiful ((Alicia)))) Let go of the wheel Sweet Lady of light,, and breath deep,, let Hope guide your Spirit and Faith speak to your Soul and then my lovely walk within the light that paints your canvas,
All that is to be shall be....

:heart: :heart: :heart:

tanyaann's photo
Thu 03/19/09 09:30 AM
Wow! flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 03/19/09 10:37 AM
Edited by ArtGurl on Thu 03/19/09 10:38 AM


Standing by with ... whatever you need lovely ... :heart:


Listen to the niggling in your gut ... you know what to do ... I'm here if you need anything ... truly ...


Thank you precious~I love you~:heart:



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