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Your lips taste of bittersweet
I caress your face and slide mine against your cheek Your eyes spark fires in darkness light the night our lips will never tire your salty skin my hardened body together wrapped in sin twice used air gasping for more with gentle pulling of your hair only two left in the world sculpted together like sand in the ocean forms a pearl Hard and soft around we gravitate finding ourselves lost Drinking you like life force rejuvenated by the dew forever us against the times secured by trust no need for cheap lines lovers wrapped in silk stimulated by our minds together in bliss now come here lover and lets consecrate this ©2009March By: Roberto Loera |
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Excellent!
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Excellent! |
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Awesome...
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nice use of description reading it made me imagine like I was in the presence of a nice gal and imagining her bittersweet lips and salty body.
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ooh I like this
I haven't been around much lately ... nice to read you and welcome RawB |
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really good write
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Most excellent warming effects and visuals
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sensual feelings so beautifully expressed...loved it!!
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Thank you all very much for your comments =)
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Great job ~ the entire write ~ and
"no need for cheap lines lovers wrapped in silk stimulated by our minds" is a fantastic verse |
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Dude - that was hott.
Turned me on a little - I love sexy poetry. |
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I'm so glad that you all dropped in and shared with me, thank you all for your comments you all are too kind
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