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Topic: Shattered Glass~
Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Fri 03/13/09 05:14 PM Edited by Unknow on Fri 03/13/09 05:15 PM
Shattered glass Slices My skin. Cold Burning Stinging Flesh Reminds me I am Alive. Red droplettes Stain The threads In the Carpet. Shattered glass Cuts through My Lifeline The only one I Have. 3132009

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 03/13/09 05:22 PM
Wow this feels cold and lonely You alright?

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 03/13/09 05:54 PM
Shattered glass Slices My skin. Cold Burning Stinging Flesh Reminds me I am Alive. Red droplettes Stain The threads In the Carpet. Shattered glass Cuts through My Lifeline The only one I Have. 3132009 If one were to read between the lines, this would imply you are a cutter. I echo LS's question. Are you alright?

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Fri 03/13/09 09:14 PM Edited by DaveyB on Fri 03/13/09 09:21 PM
Oh storm . Have faith in all you believe that is your greatest resource for strength right now. Please know that my thoughts are with you and your family .

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Sat 03/14/09 05:49 AM
Wow this feels cold and lonely You alright? Yeah..Im ok. Thanks

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Sat 03/14/09 05:50 AM
Shattered glass Slices My skin. Cold Burning Stinging Flesh Reminds me I am Alive. Red droplettes Stain The threads In the Carpet. Shattered glass Cuts through My Lifeline The only one I Have. 3132009 If one were to read between the lines, this would imply you are a cutter. I echo LS's question. Are you alright? Reading between the lines is a dangerous thing. No, Im not a cutter nor have I ever been a cutter. I thank you for your concern nonetheless.

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Sat 03/14/09 05:51 AM
Oh storm . Have faith in all you believe that is your greatest resource for strength right now. Please know that my thoughts are with you and your family . Thank you.

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sat 03/14/09 06:10 AM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Sat 03/14/09 06:28 AM
Well I'm glad you already answered MsWiz with her question for it does to a point imply a cutter. But then also it could be about a love gone bad and the hurt cuts one deep. Nether less it was very heartfelt. And do hope all is well for I don't recall you writing such deep dark thoughts. Actually reminds me of something Jenni (Poet) use to write. But like I said very good.

Haloheldbyhorns Joined Sun 09/28/08 Posts: 5325	Sat 03/14/09 11:18 AM
This reminds me of Evenessance "tourinquet" I know how you feel and will be there soon to hug you and face your fears with you

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Sun 03/15/09 05:29 AM
Well I'm glad you already answered MsWiz with her question for it does to a point imply a cutter. But then also it could be about a love gone bad and the hurt cuts one deep. Nether less it was very heartfelt. And do hope all is well for I don't recall you writing such deep dark thoughts. Actually reminds me of something Jenni (Poet) use to write. But like I said very good. Thank you TxsGal

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Sun 03/15/09 05:30 AM
This reminds me of Evenessance "tourinquet" I know how you feel and will be there soon to hug you and face your fears with you

vanillalilla Joined Mon 03/16/09 Posts: 3	Mon 03/16/09 11:33 AM
that's what it is a great written poem

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Mon 03/16/09 04:49 PM
that's what it is a great written poem Thank you kindly vanillalilla~