Topic: ~The Exiled Nobleman~
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Sat 03/07/09 07:18 PM
Endless rantings leaving echos of disparity
Penetrating the exquisite nurturing of calm
A formidable vessel lies infected w/ guilt
Roughly breeding from it's ruthless charm

Splintered fragments from crackling throat
Leaving innocence with some redolent stain
Stealthily grasping for crime-less victims
A masked need lies dormant awaiting gain

Sanity passing through an hourglass frame
Seasons vanishing through ill-fated time
Casting shadows hover over precious hope
Offering the luster of a street worn dime

Tides washing steadily over faultless Man
Dreaded water failed to hydrate his skin
Once flavored sweetly with upscaled life
He's now reduced and parched from within

Felled by tainted mind lacking conscience
His self-served doom by uncharted choice
Once so boastful with an arrogant posture
Slay-ed countless with a scalpel-ed voice

Now some claw less crab hopelessly beached
While insects attempt to breach his shell
Longing soothing shade & unwarranted mercy
A silenced pardon near the gates of Hell

His diminishing heart seeking repentance
A cracked steeple draws time closely near
Desperately searching for some forgiveness
Through moth riddled webbings dripped fear

Written by CyPoet 3/7/09

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Sat 03/07/09 07:21 PM

Endless rantings leaving echos of disparity
Penetrating the exquisite nurturing of calm
A formidable vessel lies infected w/ guilt
Roughly breeding from it's ruthless charm

Splintered fragments from crackling throat
Leaving innocence with some redolent stain
Stealthily grasping for crime-less victims
A masked need lies dormant awaiting gain

Sanity passing through an hourglass frame
Seasons vanishing through ill-fated time
Casting shadows hover over precious hope
Offering the luster of a street worn dime

Tides washing steadily over faultless Man
Dreaded water failed to hydrate his skin
Once flavored sweetly with upscaled life
He's now reduced and parched from within

Felled by tainted mind lacking conscience
His self-served doom by uncharted choice
Once so boastful with an arrogant posture
Slay-ed countless with a scalpel-ed voice

Now some claw less crab hopelessly beached
While insects attempt to breach his shell
Longing soothing shade & unwarranted mercy
A silenced pardon near the gates of Hell

His diminishing heart seeking repentance
A cracked steeple draws time closely near
Desperately searching for some forgiveness
Through moth riddled webbings dripped fear

Written by CyPoet 3/7/09



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Sun 03/08/09 12:41 AM
Awesome...flowerforyou

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Sun 03/08/09 05:28 AM
Whew! Absolutely stunning write.

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Sun 03/08/09 07:02 AM
brilliant write as always

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Sun 03/08/09 11:33 AM
I thank U all very kindly for reading & commenting on this write.I am truly happy that U enjoyed it & I am deeply grateful for your inspiring words that U left me with.Godspeed!CyPoet
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Mon 03/09/09 08:03 AM
(((Steven ))))

How I truely have missed your enlightment your strength your canvas,,

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Mon 03/09/09 08:10 PM
Nice one {{{{{Steven}}}}}}smooched :heart: flowers flowers

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Mon 03/09/09 08:21 PM
Awsome Write steven!

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Tue 03/10/09 07:07 AM
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Much Luv & Godspeed!Cy"Steven"Thx!:heart: flowers

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Tue 03/10/09 08:22 AM
It's such deep thought provoking work you do. Always a pleasure to read you.

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Tue 03/10/09 08:47 AM
This is a fine write

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Wed 03/11/09 05:52 AM
DaveyB~:smile: flowerforyou drinker
Kc0003~:smile: flowerforyou drinker
-I would like to thank both of U for reading & commenting on this write.I've intro.a couple changes recently in my writing style & I'm happy to say that the results are showing a pos.reflection of them.Thx!again & I hope U enjoyed this write.Godspeed!Cy:smile:

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Wed 03/11/09 09:33 AM


Another interesting write CY.


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Wed 03/11/09 09:38 AM
Excellent write!!bigsmile

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Wed 03/11/09 11:51 AM
Susan~:wink: flowerforyou :heart:
Kristi~:wink: flowerforyou :heart:
I thank you both very kindly for reading & commenting on this write.I realize that a looming darkness cloaks over the dreaded unknown w/ this one but it felt like I was continuously pulled in that direction.I'm glad U both enjoyed it though.U wonderful ladies truly inspire me & keep me driven.I am deeply grateful.Much Luv & Godspeed!Cy.:smile:{{{bear~hug}}}:tongue: flowers & flowers