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look into my eyes, and let me know what you see........
i swear i see the death rising toll clashing, skull breaking rule storming, light burning dark shading, my life changing, way of hatred, rulers patriots and abstract captivating, sound surrounding images with war and rumors escalating, ground dirt trembling under, boots filled with mud and cuts revealing, deadly spikes, contagious quarantined area filled with blood bathed empty shoes and blood drenched shirts, and i swear to you this is not a place of dismantled clean dirt.... I swear i hear the screeches and the battle cry, the ones who live been born to die, at young age around twenty nine, nine lives at stake like cats and pride, this way i hide, cause bullet hiss, with the ground shaking under my feet and wrist, i hear those desperate innocent cry in hunger and pain, i hear blood drop shower the streets like falling in vane, sensing the battlefield raging through like bulls in a Spanish parade, straight ahead are crooked bullets slinging a stray, and waves of enemy hordes leaving their ground troops behind, knowing only life to die counts more then life divides, and now its time to addict yourself prescription, and no soldiers of the past wont let future exceptions.... I swear I feel the heart pulsing pulse stretching, exonerating from any point you need to relieve, receive a rating of exaggerating desecrating a regulation in this evisceration of deteriorating words exclaiming to a more distorted past interminable future, a never ending sight, within many pulsating destructive force denied, within my eye i feel myopia in the center, cause of short distanced death i notice long term blurr of our future, unless we act upon, I Swear we might not make it, to a point in which we act, dont hold counter conflicting with in the diamonds we stack...... |
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look into my eyes, and let me know what you see........ i swear i see the death rising toll clashing, skull breaking rule storming, light burning dark shading, my life changing, way of hatred, rulers patriots and abstract captivating, sound surrounding images with war and rumors escalating, ground dirt trembling under, boots filled with mud and cuts revealing, deadly spikes, contagious quarantined area filled with blood bathed empty shoes and blood drenched shirts, and i swear to you this is not a place of dismantled clean dirt.... I swear i hear the screeches and the battle cry, the ones who live been born to die, at young age around twenty nine, nine lives at stake like cats and pride, this way i hide, cause bullet hiss, with the ground shaking under my feet and wrist, i hear those desperate innocent cry in hunger and pain, i hear blood drop shower the streets like falling in vane, sensing the battlefield raging through like bulls in a Spanish parade, straight ahead are crooked bullets slinging a stray, and waves of enemy hordes leaving their ground troops behind, knowing only life to die counts more then life divides, and now its time to addict yourself prescription, and no soldiers of the past wont let future exceptions.... I swear I feel the heart pulsing pulse stretching, exonerating from any point you need to relieve, receive a rating of exaggerating desecrating a regulation in this evisceration of deteriorating words exclaiming to a more distorted past interminable future, a never ending sight, within many pulsating destructive force denied, within my eye i feel myopia in the center, cause of short distanced death i notice long term blurr of our future, unless we act upon, I Swear we might not make it, to a point in which we act, dont hold counter conflicting with in the diamonds we stack...... good write |
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thanks, Much appreciated
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it would make an incredible death-metal ensomble! very well written!!!
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lol yeh, i wouldnt mind switching up a bit to death metal, even tho my aim was to make it into rock and rap, it would feel nice with the bass and the drums with a dark paino playing in the backround, you know, but yeh thanks
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look into my eyes, and let me know what you see........ i swear i see the death rising toll clashing, skull breaking rule storming, light burning dark shading, my life changing, way of hatred, rulers patriots and abstract captivating, sound surrounding images with war and rumors escalating, ground dirt trembling under, boots filled with mud and cuts revealing, deadly spikes, contagious quarantined area filled with blood bathed empty shoes and blood drenched shirts, and i swear to you this is not a place of dismantled clean dirt.... I swear i hear the screeches and the battle cry, the ones who live been born to die, at young age around twenty nine, nine lives at stake like cats and pride, this way i hide, cause bullet hiss, with the ground shaking under my feet and wrist, i hear those desperate innocent cry in hunger and pain, i hear blood drop shower the streets like falling in vane, sensing the battlefield raging through like bulls in a Spanish parade, straight ahead are crooked bullets slinging a stray, and waves of enemy hordes leaving their ground troops behind, knowing only life to die counts more then life divides, and now its time to addict yourself prescription, and no soldiers of the past wont let future exceptions.... I swear I feel the heart pulsing pulse stretching, exonerating from any point you need to relieve, receive a rating of exaggerating desecrating a regulation in this evisceration of deteriorating words exclaiming to a more distorted past interminable future, a never ending sight, within many pulsating destructive force denied, within my eye i feel myopia in the center, cause of short distanced death i notice long term blurr of our future, unless we act upon, I Swear we might not make it, to a point in which we act, dont hold counter conflicting with in the diamonds we stack...... Erosion senses eroded the need to feel to talk yourself into what should be real where did I go when I was reborn why am I comfortable embracing such scorn what do I see and why do I swear perhaps the oath to open and bare no more to pull away from the dying death screams to life and babies, still crying Raine Les 3/8/2009 deep cuts, thank you |
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