I'm just looking for some feedback,only the brutally honest kind.

looks pretty good dude...oh i'm not a woman by the way

welcome and good luck.

Not bad...nice range of pictures, however, speaking for myself....I like to see a nice close up facial shot with a smile on men's profiles.

not bad,join in the forums so we get to know you

Nice job. Good pics, very specific on interests. Welcome to Mingle and good luck.

Very cute and I love the view.

Yummy

Ok, I'm an English Teacher, so you can take this for whatever you think it is worth.

It looks like your profile has some good information in it, but I'm not really sure. You see, it's hard to read. You have a lot of very short, very choppy incomplete sentences, and you don't press the space key after your periods. This makes everything run together, and makes it more of an effort to read.

In my opinion, you will be more likely to have people slow down and take the time to read about you if you make those changes.

Also a little bit of white space is much easier on the eyes. Break your blurb up into a couple of short paragraphs, with a line break between them, and it will also make things easier to read. We tend to use white space to help guide our eyes across the screen. If it's not there, it's easy to loose your spot.

looks good jeff, good luck

Good luck with the effort. Trying to teach writing on the internet is like one person plugging a dam with eighty million holes.

Oh, don't be such a pessimist. Besides, I was just trying to be helpful. A lot of people don't know how white space works for helping the ease of reading.

You're talking to a crusty old New York cynic.

And that's on my good days.... Seriously, good luck! The world needs Don Quixotes

Well, I didn't think that I was jousting at windmills. After all, he asked for suggestions first, which means he is probably willing to take them. That means that my efforts are not as futile as Quixotes'.

Do you see any difference?

looks good to me...