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its one of the poems i wrote ,
cought in a storm __________________________ The wind blows , I hear someone calling my name, or is it just the wind? Sunshine once brighted my day , now a shadow falls over me. A feeling I have yet to feel wiped away, Rain falls , thunder strikes, lights go out , in an instant all is changed. I hear my own heart beating, I feel I have lost my way. when I look in the looking glass I see who i dont want to be. I am sinking like in quicksand, I cant pull out, I reach for the hand I once held it is not there, raindrops slowly fall down my face, I grab hold of the sand around me, close my eyes and wish Iam in a dream, I remember him and always will, I take out my umbrella and walk towards home lost and afraid. with the little strenth i have left I open the door,hug my children then tuck my self in bed. written by masterpiece2 |
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thanks ms teddy
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very beautifdul sug
heart felt keep writein sug party on... |
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thank you twosteper,
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I love it.
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EXCELLENT!
Ralph |
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me too
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thank you songbirrd means alot to me that you like it and ralph thank
you also styx glad you liked it as well, |
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What a beautiful poem!!!
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thank you lezah, it means alot to me to know you all like it here at jsh
thanks for taking the time to read it , |
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You Rawk Gurlie!!!!
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Beautiful
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thank you lamom ,
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