Silence unforgiven
love undefined
loneliness state of mind

lies pain
deceptions reframed
soul has been slain

friend fake
heart brakes
learned from my mistakes

W.A.M. i/23/08

Growth from within,, we fall we learn we live

Hugs to you Bill

I like this, flows well.

Would not have any idea what to call it.

good job

may I suggest......Unforgiven Silence

GREAT JOB BILL as always

reflection?

Deep write Bill...

Illuminated comes to mind for a title...

Love it. "Mistaken Identity"

love it Bill

Sounds painful Bill but it is well written and expressive.

Unraveled

Thanks Denise isn't funny no matter how old we get we still have lessons to learn How is Daniel?

Thanks WWrange Don't feel bad neither did i lol sorry we've never met but you seem like a very generous person

Thanks MirrorMirror Man 58,546 do you still have finger tips lol

Thanks Patti that does sound like a good title

Thanks kcOOO3 that would be a good title too. We've never met either but a friend of Vicki's is a friend of mine

Thanks Ainjel that would be a fine title too. I hope all is well in NZ.

Thanks Wench Maybe i should let everybody name my poems more often

Thanks Pam i'm glad you liked it I hope your recovering well

Thanks Vicki thats also a good title Alittle bit of pain just makes the happiness that much more enjoyable

THank you all for taking the time to read and post

Whatever you title it, it always switches that light on inside of you....

ok mr. numbers...we have commented on each others writes for quite a while now but, a friend by association is good enough for me... thanks vicki....

Yeah this is true Call me Bill my friend

I could think of a number of names for your poem,whatever name anyone suggests it would not take away from the expression and written style.

thank you lass
I hope all is well on the other side of the atlantic

This is quite sad Bill, lovely...but sad....

Very nice flow & contemplative.Excellent write.

Awwww, puddin what'ca going on bout now...you silly nut cracker...hey southern soul...do ya need a shoulder or somebunny?

J/k

Nice write my dear just lovely...one pat on the back now go feed Dude some real food



Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy, I got it the title...





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I just know you liked it...



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