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Silence unforgiven
love undefined loneliness state of mind lies pain deceptions reframed soul has been slain friend fake heart brakes learned from my mistakes W.A.M. i/23/08 |
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Growth from within,, we fall we learn we live
Hugs to you Bill  
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I like this, flows well.
Would not have any idea what to call it. |
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Silence unforgiven love undefined loneliness state of mind lies pain deceptions reframed soul has been slain friend fake heart brakes learned from my mistakes W.A.M. i/23/08  good job
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may I suggest......Unforgiven Silence
GREAT JOB BILL as always 
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reflection?
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Deep write Bill...
Illuminated comes to mind for a title... |
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Love it. "Mistaken Identity"
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love it Bill
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Sounds painful Bill but it is well written and expressive.
Unraveled |
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Thanks Denise isn't funny no matter how old we get we still have lessons to learn
How is Daniel?
Thanks WWrange Don't feel bad neither did i lol sorry we've never met but you seem like a very generous person
Thanks MirrorMirror Man 58,546 do you still have finger tips lol
Thanks Patti that does sound like a good title
Thanks kcOOO3 that would be a good title too. We've never met either but a friend of Vicki's is a friend of mine
Thanks Ainjel that would be a fine title too. I hope all is well in NZ.
Thanks Wench Maybe i should let everybody name my poems more often
Thanks Pam i'm glad you liked it I hope your recovering well
Thanks Vicki thats also a good title Alittle bit of pain just makes the happiness that much more enjoyable
THank you all for taking the time to read and post
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Whatever you title it, it always switches that light on inside of you....
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ok mr. numbers...we have commented on each others writes for quite a while now but, a friend by association is good enough for me...
 thanks vicki....
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ok mr. numbers...we have commented on each others writes for quite a while now but, a friend by association is good enough for me... thanks vicki....
Yeah this is true Call me Bill my friend
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Whatever you title it, it always switches that light on inside of you....
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I could think of a number of names for your poem,whatever name anyone suggests it would not take away from the expression and written style.
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I could think of a number of names for your poem,whatever name anyone suggests it would not take away from the expression and written style.
thank you lass
I hope all is well on the other side of the atlantic
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Silence unforgiven love undefined loneliness state of mind lies pain deceptions reframed soul has been slain friend fake heart brakes learned from my mistakes W.A.M. i/23/08 This is quite sad Bill, lovely...but sad....
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Very nice flow & contemplative.Excellent write.
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Edited by
Noden
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Mon 03/09/09 05:45 PM
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 Awwww, puddin what'ca going on bout now...you silly nut cracker...hey southern soul...do ya need a shoulder or somebunny?
J/k Nice write my dear just lovely...one pat on the back now go feed Dude some real food   
Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy, I got it the title... <drum roll please> 
I just know you liked it... Ya Baby 
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