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and so I say to myself do not do this open your heart and you will receive a beating hope for love and you will be disheartened soon enough you will be rejected you will be worst off then you once started rather to be admired from a distance than to be scoffed up close do not do this it is hard to keep up appearances a mans eyes are not always complacent and easily they are offended by imperfections in his heart I have no right to be but be for him his eyes are likely to wander and they easily unconvinced and certainly they are aggrieved by fault he is natures foremost critic and as for us women we are different but no better we too are at fault so better for I to be as an acquaintance even so a man seeks comeliness in his companion he does not want to be seen with a lesser beauty his image rests upon me what a burden so I say leave me be I only want to be your friend a platonic relation his lips says yes but in his heart he loves provocation he feels that he is equipped to the challenge so what am I to do © |
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Reminds me of a few friends I know, who are only but Trophies for their partners...
Nice write by the way... 
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Sad that many will fail to see the inner beauty of a persons heart. This is nice sami, thanks for sharing and welcome to the poetry forum.
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That was very heart felt
Welcome to the poetry section 
may it help enlighten your heart and soul
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Edited by
Sharris
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Thu 03/05/09 05:59 PM
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and so I say to myself do not do this open your heart and you will receive a beating hope for love and you will be disheartened soon enough you will be rejected you will be worst off then you once started rather to be admired from a distance than to be scoffed up close do not do this it is hard to keep up appearances a mans eyes are not always complacent and easily they are offended by imperfections in his heart I have no right to be but be for him his eyes are likely to wander and they easily unconvinced and certainly they are aggrieved by fault he is natures foremost critic and as for us women we are different but no better we too are at fault so better for I to be as an acquaintance even so a man seeks comeliness in his companion he does not want to be seen with a lesser beauty his image rests upon me what a burden so I say leave me be I only want to be your friend a platonic relation his lips says yes but in his heart he loves provocation he feels that he is equipped to the challenge so what am I to do © The shadows stream and leave their veil pensive bleeds, revealing a lesser beauty is not from his eye perhaps only his heart's deception. Raine Les 3/5/2009 Thank You |
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thanks everyone your comments mean so much to me :)
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Edited by
sami714
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Thu 03/05/09 06:43 PM
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that is beautiful and amazing Sharris :)
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Edited by
kc0003
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Thu 03/05/09 06:53 PM
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and so I say to myself do not do this open your heart and you will receive a beating hope for love and you will be disheartened soon enough you will be rejected you will be worst off then you once started rather to be admired from a distance than to be scoffed up close do not do this it is hard to keep up appearances a mans eyes are not always complacent and easily they are offended by imperfections in his heart I have no right to be but be for him his eyes are likely to wander and they easily unconvinced and certainly they are aggrieved by fault he is natures foremost critic and as for us women we are different but no better we too are at fault so better for I to be as an acquaintance even so a man seeks comeliness in his companion he does not want to be seen with a lesser beauty his image rests upon me what a burden so I say leave me be I only want to be your friend a platonic relation his lips says yes but in his heart he loves provocation he feels that he is equipped to the challenge so what am I to do © very nice, once again... there is passion in the things you write and i can feel the emotion in you... very human and very real cant wait to read more...
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and so I say to myself do not do this open your heart and you will receive a beating hope for love and you will be disheartened soon enough you will be rejected you will be worst off then you once started rather to be admired from a distance than to be scoffed up close do not do this it is hard to keep up appearances a mans eyes are not always complacent and easily they are offended by imperfections in his heart I have no right to be but be for him his eyes are likely to wander and they easily unconvinced and certainly they are aggrieved by fault he is natures foremost critic and as for us women we are different but no better we too are at fault so better for I to be as an acquaintance even so a man seeks comeliness in his companion he does not want to be seen with a lesser beauty his image rests upon me what a burden so I say leave me be I only want to be your friend a platonic relation his lips says yes but in his heart he loves provocation he feels that he is equipped to the challenge so what am I to do © 
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she steps towards him
she is shy standing there a little tired it's been a long day, night, month, year he sees her overwhelming quiet beauty he warmth is static electricity moving close hands slide around a waist arms drape across shoulders splayed fingers in my hair touching softness at first at outstanding curves then pulling closely tightly pressing warmth builds to heat modeling clay touching everywhere (((sami714)))
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very heartfelt,I can feel the emotion in you.Nice add Slow
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 errr... "her warmth" oops 
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Your words reveal what your survival traits cannot yet fathom.
Keep working at it, those comfortable veils of disbelief will lift allowing you to soar over foreign soil your mirror will reveal and then you find-------the you you suspect but cannot yet accept. Okay, I'm done rambling. Beautiful write! |
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Full of emotion, this truly moved me.
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