Near to the door,he paused to stand,All who were watching did not speak,as a silent tear rolled down his cheek.And through his mind,the memories ran,of the moments they’d walked together over the sand But now her eyes were so terribly cold,for he never again would have her to hold.They watched in silence,as he bent near,and whispered the words,“I love you” in her ear.He touched her face and started to cry,as he put his class ring on her finger,and wanted to die.And just then, the wind began to blow,as they lowered her casket into the snow

Emotionally beautiful....

awww, very nice..but sad..
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aw sh!t, woa, that's crushing... very well done

beautiful

Very sad and beautiful.

emotionally charged in its simplicity, very nicely done!

Very nice, strikes a special spot for me as I remember doing the same.

Thank you for the memory

I haven't read that in years. Still makes me sad.

This is a very emotional piece have seen it a few times in the past.

Matter of fact they used this at one time for a Drunk Driving ad.

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