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Sharris's photo
Sun 03/01/09 12:03 PM

Attached

Attached there is a shadow,
That only comes around,
When the light shines just right
Revealing without sound.
Always on the edge,
Outlining all my frame.
Filling with a gray hue
Etched and void of name.
A truer stark reminder
When this friend exposes,
The height and breadth involving,
Walking with my choices.

Raine Les 3/1/2009

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 03/01/09 12:07 PM


Attached

Attached there is a shadow,
That only comes around,
When the light shines just right
Revealing without sound.
Always on the edge,
Outlining all my frame.
Filling with a gray hue
Etched and void of name.
A truer stark reminder
When this friend exposes,
The height and breadth involving,
Walking with my choices.

Raine Les 3/1/2009





flowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Sun 03/01/09 12:23 PM


Attached

Attached there is a shadow,
That only comes around,
When the light shines just right
Revealing without sound.
Always on the edge,
Outlining all my frame.
Filling with a gray hue
Etched and void of name.
A truer stark reminder
When this friend exposes,
The height and breadth involving,
Walking with my choices.

Raine Les 3/1/2009


flowerforyou flowerforyou
no photo
Sun 03/01/09 04:31 PM


Attached

Attached there is a shadow,
That only comes around,
When the light shines just right
Revealing without sound.
Always on the edge,
Outlining all my frame.
Filling with a gray hue
Etched and void of name.
A truer stark reminder
When this friend exposes,
The height and breadth involving,
Walking with my choices.

Raine Les 3/1/2009


no photo
Sun 03/01/09 04:32 PM


Attached

Attached there is a shadow,
That only comes around,
When the light shines just right
Revealing without sound.
Always on the edge,
Outlining all my frame.
Filling with a gray hue
Etched and void of name.
A truer stark reminder
When this friend exposes,
The height and breadth involving,
Walking with my choices.

Raine Les 3/1/2009




so many feelings portrayed in this ... and the ending- just perfect.:heart: flowerforyou flowerforyou
no photo
Sun 03/01/09 04:44 PM
Awesome...flowerforyou
kc0003's photo
Sun 03/01/09 10:03 PM
nicely done flowerforyou
LAMom's photo
Tue 03/03/09 11:48 AM


Attached

Attached there is a shadow,
That only comes around,
When the light shines just right
Revealing without sound.
Always on the edge,
Outlining all my frame.
Filling with a gray hue
Etched and void of name.
A truer stark reminder
When this friend exposes,
The height and breadth involving,
Walking with my choices.

Raine Les 3/1/2009




The light is shining:heart:

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