Topic: "something+Nothing=blank title"
RawB's photo
Sat 02/28/09 05:47 AM
Stalking you
wanting me
hiding in shadows
waiting
for the opportune moment
then pouncing
yet you embrace it
death breathing down your neck
and you turn to face it
feeling me on your skin
raised flesh
broken bracelet
pulsating chest
quivering breaths
you can taste it
quiet whimpers
worm shivers
never quick
biting lips
breath my air
sweat drips
epic

©2009 Feb. Roberto Loera



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Sat 02/28/09 04:43 PM
Nice...flowerforyou

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Sat 02/28/09 05:42 PM
WOW!!

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Sat 02/28/09 06:18 PM

Stalking you
wanting me
hiding in shadows
waiting
for the opportune moment
then pouncing
yet you embrace it
death breathing down your neck
and you turn to face it
feeling me on your skin
raised flesh
broken bracelet
pulsating chest
quivering breaths
you can taste it
quiet whimpers
worm shivers
never quick
biting lips
breath my air
sweat drips
epic

©2009 Feb. Roberto Loera





A stealthy, slinky, sexy yet dangerous piece. Yummy! Loaded with visuals. GREAT~:heart:

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Sat 02/28/09 06:36 PM
Hmmm!A very interesting piece.I like it.drinker

RawB's photo
Thu 03/05/09 06:55 AM
thank you for your comments

pkh's photo
Thu 03/05/09 06:56 AM
very nice

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/05/09 08:38 AM
Yeppppp I am so Going with the

W O W !!!!!!!!!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 03/05/09 11:17 AM
Gotta "ditto" those W O W's. Shifting back-n-forth between gettin hot-n-bothered or scared into paralysis!

Very interesting write!

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 03/05/09 01:33 PM

Gotta "ditto" those W O W's. Shifting back-n-forth between gettin hot-n-bothered or scared into paralysis!

Very interesting write!

Ditto, with all the others with this one.:thumbsup:

kc0003's photo
Thu 03/05/09 07:11 PM
you turned this one well...

imagery holds strong even after the read

drinker


RawB's photo
Thu 03/12/09 05:18 AM
wow I thought that this had died down, but I came back to see that it had gotten a few more hits bigsmile
Thank you all so much for reading and commenting on it, and even if you just dropped by to see what was going on