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Stalking you
wanting me hiding in shadows waiting for the opportune moment then pouncing yet you embrace it death breathing down your neck and you turn to face it feeling me on your skin raised flesh broken bracelet pulsating chest quivering breaths you can taste it quiet whimpers worm shivers never quick biting lips breath my air sweat drips epic ©2009 Feb. Roberto Loera |
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Nice...
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WOW!!
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Stalking you wanting me hiding in shadows waiting for the opportune moment then pouncing yet you embrace it death breathing down your neck and you turn to face it feeling me on your skin raised flesh broken bracelet pulsating chest quivering breaths you can taste it quiet whimpers worm shivers never quick biting lips breath my air sweat drips epic ©2009 Feb. Roberto Loera A stealthy, slinky, sexy yet dangerous piece. Yummy! Loaded with visuals. GREAT~ |
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Hmmm!A very interesting piece.I like it.
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thank you for your comments
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very nice
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Yeppppp I am so Going with the
W O W !!!!!!!!! |
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Gotta "ditto" those W O W's. Shifting back-n-forth between gettin hot-n-bothered or scared into paralysis!
Very interesting write! |
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Gotta "ditto" those W O W's. Shifting back-n-forth between gettin hot-n-bothered or scared into paralysis! Very interesting write! Ditto, with all the others with this one. |
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you turned this one well...
imagery holds strong even after the read |
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wow I thought that this had died down, but I came back to see that it had gotten a few more hits
Thank you all so much for reading and commenting on it, and even if you just dropped by to see what was going on |
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