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i dont know how to describe this. i wrote it about a friend of mine, we known each other since we were babies, i wrote it about things about himself he might not know, but i wrote it as if he wrote it about himself. i guess when you read it you will see what i mean. and granted you all dont know him but hopefully i can get some imput in terms if the writing itself he also is a marine.
I am a very driven individual. I let nothing stand in my way when i set a goal. I am second to none both mentally and physically. Everytime someone says i cant i do. I am both the unstoppable force and the unmoveable object. My body,my mind,and my soul are as unwavering as a tank, but my heart has a shield as thick as wax paper, both because its larger then most and because it is a rookie in terms of experience, all it has known is heartbreak. I am the greatest friend someone could ask for, as well as the most feared foe. there is no task to large or to small I wont drop everything for. I can tell when someone is lying to me, but would take a bullet for someone that hates me. I am always doing well, just not always fantastic. My character is unmatched, my charisma is second to none. I am the few I am the proud I am me I am justin jackett |
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very nice
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Edited by
lurchs_sister
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Thu 02/26/09 10:10 AM
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OOHRAH!!!!!
SEMPER FI!! This gives me goosebumps! I'm the sister of a deceased Marine and it felt like I was reading about him. Thanks for sending the tears rolling down my face and please don't change a thing it is perfect the way it is. If you can send it to him and tell him you care it will make him feel good! To Justin I give my thanks and appreciation. |
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Cool verses
I like it! |
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thanks, yall.idk i got alot of stuff to post i just didnt know if it would be good enough to go on here with everyone else awsome stuff. and i have poems and stuff to. that was just idk.
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thanks, yall.idk i got alot of stuff to post i just didnt know if it would be good enough to go on here with everyone else awsome stuff. and i have poems and stuff to. that was just idk. Your thoughts, words, and feelings are always welcome here and I think you're good so please add more as I would love to read what you have. |
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i dont know how to describe this. i wrote it about a friend of mine, we known each other since we were babies, i wrote it about things about himself he might not know, but i wrote it as if he wrote it about himself. i guess when you read it you will see what i mean. and granted you all dont know him but hopefully i can get some imput in terms if the writing itself he also is a marine. I am a very driven individual. I let nothing stand in my way when i set a goal. I am second to none both mentally and physically. Everytime someone says i cant i do. I am both the unstoppable force and the unmoveable object. My body,my mind,and my soul are as unwavering as a tank, but my heart has a shield as thick as wax paper, both because its larger then most and because it is a rookie in terms of experience, all it has known is heartbreak. I am the greatest friend someone could ask for, as well as the most feared foe. there is no task to large or to small I wont drop everything for. I can tell when someone is lying to me, but would take a bullet for someone that hates me. I am always doing well, just not always fantastic. My character is unmatched, my charisma is second to none. I am the few I am the proud I am me I am justin jackett Excellent write Style (which I'd say you have in spades) |
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Very cool write,,very cool friend...
BE ALL YOU CAN BE.....and I know you WILL,,wink, Ohh WAH!!!
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