Topic: Verses on Love
JasonSB123's photo
Wed 02/25/09 06:15 PM

Loving the Lover


Like Gilligan
Romantically hopeless
Loved
Nonetheless

Flowers for Algernon
Given with empathy
In ourselves
Creates sympathy

Oftimes we Love
Descrying Loving in another
Not because they're Pretty
Or Sexy
Brave
Wealthy
Kind
Powerful

We Love their Loving

Longing for emulation
We settle for emotion
Ending our isolation
We set ourselves in motion

And
(with care)
Learn
Loving
Giving
Serving
Are synonymous

We become the Loving
Because we Loved the Lover


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Wed 02/25/09 11:51 PM
Love it...

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Thu 02/26/09 02:29 AM
I really enjoyed this-great ending.flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/26/09 08:20 AM
Yaaaaaaaa I am so loving this

Bravoooooooooooooooo my friend flowers

pkh's photo
Thu 02/26/09 08:38 AM
wonderful,enjoyed

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 02/26/09 09:39 AM
Awesome writebigsmile

JasonSB123's photo
Thu 02/26/09 10:25 AM
Edited by JasonSB123 on Thu 02/26/09 10:26 AM
...a pleasure to Serve:heart:

My sincere thanks, I thought I might have gone over the edge with the "Gilligan" reference.laugh