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The child's eyes Look to the sun My light stripped By a single move Edit, exit, evict Me from her life My baby, my blood My hope, my heart Revisit the past Pray for the future Look to the light Find the key Open your eyes A part of me You must see I die within Without her On bended knees My silent pleas Land in mid air Nothing there My Trinity |
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All words fall short of the empathy inspired here. Beautiful tears. 
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All words fall short of the empathy inspired here. Beautiful tears.
thank you for that lovely comment
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2KidsMom- thank you
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The child's eyes Look to the sun My light stripped By a single move Edit, exit, evict Me from her life My baby, my blood My hope, my heart Revisit the past Pray for the future Look to the light Find the key Open your eyes A part of me You must see I die within Without her On bended knees My silent pleas Land in mid air Nothing there My Trinity  nice
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Heartfelt.
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good write,very heartfelt
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"You must see
I die within Without her On bended knees My silent pleas Land in mid air" It is the feeling of no one listening, caring, that so often intensifies our pain. I would like to think that this silence, this void, is where our healing begins, where we must look within ourselves for the strength to continue. An empty nest can echo silence in a parents heart. I agree, very heartfelt 
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Lovely this is simply Soul-full
Heartwrenching, Heart-felt Purity of your Soul ((((( Hugs ))))))
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MirrorMirror-thanks
BonnyMiss- I appreciate your comment
pkh- thanks, you are always so kind
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Awesom
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"You must see I die within Without her On bended knees My silent pleas Land in mid air" It is the feeling of no one listening, caring, that so often intensifies our pain. I would like to think that this silence, this void, is where our healing begins, where we must look within ourselves for the strength to continue. An empty nest can echo silence in a parents heart. I agree, very heartfelt
thank you for your kind advise
Written about my granddaughter...when young kids have children it can be a challenge when the mother does not see the importance of a child knowing the family of the father when they are no longer together. |
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"You must see I die within Without her On bended knees My silent pleas Land in mid air" It is the feeling of no one listening, caring, that so often intensifies our pain. I would like to think that this silence, this void, is where our healing begins, where we must look within ourselves for the strength to continue. An empty nest can echo silence in a parents heart. I agree, very heartfelt
thank you for your kind advise
Written about my granddaughter...when young kids have children it can be a challenge when the mother does not see the importance of a child knowing the family of the father when they are no longer together. I know that one personally. I have 2 grandchildren I have never seen. They are now 9 and 7 years old. Their mother felt it unimportant to know me because of my past. Her new father-in-law is in prison.... one place I had never been.  Will they ever learn? 
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I felt your words ... haunting ... human ... as only you could write them ... bravo!
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Lovely this is simply Soul-full Heartwrenching, Heart-felt Purity of your Soul ((((( Hugs ))))))
thanks LAMom-we both know how important children are- oh to see through their eyes
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Jimmy- good to hear from you
ArtGurl-you always offer up such eloquent comments
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Heart felt words; and if a childs effort to live is bigger than their little hands, your words express the effort for your grandchild.
Even two hearts and flowers fall short of what you deserve.
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Faith, pk, keep the faith as I know you'll keep the love. You don't hold grudges and you don't irrationally judge(jeepers, I don't think I've ever known you to be judgmental) - she'll (the mom'll) need your strength, quiet wisdom, and gentle guidance. Breathe, sweetpea, brrreeatheeeeee..................
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Very touching write
I live with a decision not unlike this. It kills me so, my heart goes out to you. |
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