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The subject line pretty much says it all. I created my page about a day ago and would be interest on peoples thought as to the layout/picture selection/the whole shebang.
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Shebangs shebangs, she moves she moves
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Pics are okay but could be a little clearer, and you might want a closeup. The essay is also okay, but I would eliminate the first line and this one: "Some other things about me...ummmmmm... I think I've actually covered the basics pretty well." They are pointless. You might also want to add something about the type of woman you seek.
And ELIMINATE THAT RANT!!!! I guarantee that's not going to win you any points. Nobody likes a whiner. Yes, you are whining. |
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UUHHH HUUH HUUUUH.... UUUUHH HUUUH HUUUUH....HE SAID PENIS.....UUUUHH HUUUUHH HUUUUH UUUUUH HUUUH HUUUH......
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i have a boner now
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