Topic: Deaths's Deaths-bed
DeathsTreaty's photo
Sat 02/21/09 11:17 AM
In my time of self mourning
I leave myself to you
Take my body and burry it as deep as my thoughts that follow
Bring my coffin to a dim and fearful place
only to keep the weak ones away
To not waste a tear and cry anywhere other then from the heart
Keep your words and step away from my wings
They keep death near and life so far away
Play a sound of silence as the ones who knew me show a respect and grief
Listen to the tears and walk away only

s1owhand's photo
Sat 02/21/09 11:20 AM
glasses

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Sat 02/21/09 11:20 AM
death iz soooo beautiful bt yet to cum to moi!

DeathsTreaty's photo
Sat 02/21/09 11:25 AM
Time and Death both like the idea of suspence

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Sat 02/21/09 11:26 AM
Liked this one even more....:wink: flowerforyou flowers flowerforyou

DeathsTreaty's photo
Sat 02/21/09 11:30 AM
Thanx for reading everyone ^^


Do you mind me asking what you got from my write?

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Sat 02/21/09 11:48 AM

Thanx for reading everyone ^^


Do you mind me asking what you got from my write?
To me its deep,I think it gives me pleasure.

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Sat 02/21/09 03:30 PM

Thanx for reading everyone ^^


Do you mind me asking what you got from my write?


Don't be fake, be true...


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Sat 02/21/09 04:21 PM
aaa just put me out with the trash with one of those pine tree air freshenerslaugh

Good deep write DeathsTreaty glasses

Sharris's photo
Sat 02/21/09 05:04 PM

In my time of self mourning
I leave myself to you
Take my body and burry it as deep as my thoughts that follow
Bring my coffin to a dim and fearful place
only to keep the weak ones away
To not waste a tear and cry anywhere other then from the heart
Keep your words and step away from my wings
They keep death near and life so far away
Play a sound of silence as the ones who knew me show a respect and grief
Listen to the tears and walk away only



Lament, please hurry
there is no time
energy wanes
death so sublime
consume me ere
I think too long
life was then
and this a song
a tear a sigh
and mourning's bliss
the coffin soils
beneath all this
lament, respect and grief
its wings
even self
with silence stings.

Raine Les 2/21/2009

I enjoyed your piece, as you search for your peace. These my thoughts, I share
sharris

kc0003's photo
Sat 02/21/09 10:41 PM
drinker glasses