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Topic: Poor Creature
DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Sat 02/21/09 11:16 AM
The colors of life still do not show? Does it let you bleed? Find it quickly Before it has a chance to catch up Do not stare with such a stone face You have till noon So go now Quickly Look at it run Like a beast without it's head That name you burden What nonsense is there to belive Poor Creature Poor Beast Poor bastard Poor fate of that man

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 02/21/09 11:19 AM


2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sat 02/21/09 11:24 AM
Very nice.

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Sat 02/21/09 11:30 AM
Thanx for reading ^^ Do you mind me asking what you got from my write?

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sat 02/21/09 11:43 AM
A man trying to run away from life.?,maybe.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 02/23/09 07:45 AM


pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 02/23/09 12:14 PM
very nice

JasonSB123 Joined Tue 01/06/09 Posts: 65	Mon 02/23/09 07:23 PM
Do you mind me asking what you got from my write? Yeah, someone who sees that the consequences of their actions have become intolerable, horrific, monsterous. Then uselessly attempting to escape their karma. Most insightful.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 02/23/09 09:30 PM
as the chase commences- can we run right through and begin anew? Very nice Deaths Treaty.

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