Topic: My Heart Aches
tessa68's photo
Sat 02/21/09 02:11 AM
My heart aches when I talk to you
My heart aches when I don’t hear from you
My heart aches when I long for you

I don’t know why
You’ve taken over my thoughts
I can’t explain

You’re still a stranger
Far away
I want you close by

I MISS YOU!love love love

HawaiiMusikMan's photo
Sat 02/21/09 02:14 AM
Nice poem! I feel the same way about someone right now

Puffins1958's photo
Sat 02/21/09 02:57 AM
I'm sure when they read this....they will realize they feel the same way!!!!

tessa68's photo
Sat 02/21/09 02:58 AM

I'm sure when they read this....they will realize they feel the same way!!!!


what if not?frustrated frustrated frustrated

scoundrel's photo
Sat 02/21/09 03:12 AM
What if they think you meant it for somebody else?


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Sat 02/21/09 04:06 AM
Heart aches are a universal feeling. We are all inflicted with them at times. I am not immune to having had one a time or two.

Nice piece, it conveys feelings many of have had or still have. Thanks for sharing

tessa68's photo
Sat 02/21/09 05:17 AM

What if they think you meant it for somebody else?




ooouuuccchhh!:cry: :cry: :cry:

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Sat 02/21/09 08:21 AM
We all feel that way at one time or another- your poem expresses it nicely.flowerforyou flowerforyou