Glittering stars wink bathed in milky light
rain decorates a driveway,
Tiny droplets explode,
Speckled pavement and fragrant grass
even the rain can be beautiful.
Over and over dreams are shattered
lies are spun from wished delusions
Prayers said in broken whispers sail beyond its face
Oblivious to the sorrow within each voice
the silent watcher only spills more light.
Somewhere love is trying to heal the pain
Only it can see through the moons wise eye
there is beauty even in the rain

I took my time reading this once and then read each line again, only this time outloud. I then paused for a moment between each line and pondered the thought. Each line in it's own right evokes feeling and emotion. Each line can tell it's own story.

I hope all who reads it will reads it outloud to see if they to can feel the emoltion.

Very nice. I enjoyed this. Thanks much for sharing.

thank you for taking the time to read it and also for your compliment i was afraid it sounded unorganized and confusing

No, tater, he's right, very well done.

thanks you guys

I see your heart for poetry in every write you write I read.

ummm thanks..i think lol

Not at all. Made perfect sense to me. And you very welcome.