Topic: MY GIFT
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Wed 02/11/09 11:42 AM
MY GIFT

I felt something in me
A feeling long gone deep within my soul
Not knowing if I was capable of its retrieval
Awakened in me I feel its presence

Still... Timid & Weak
Your gentleness is ever needed
If you so choose....I will relinquish my hold
upon such a feeling to allow for the transformation

To... Bold & Reverent
Held in your gaze longer each time
Once ashamed for my own reasons
Now, I am admitting to it

As strong as a river in the rush of Spring thaw...
This feeling that is within me...I wish to give to you

My Gift
I wish...I hope...I pray...
You will accept and not betray

Each day it becomes stronger
Each night it is nurtured
Can it be...I believe it so
My gift I entrust to you


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Thu 02/12/09 12:01 AM
Your poetry is a gift...

Jimmy59's photo
Thu 02/12/09 12:06 AM
Brovo ! Brovo !:banana:

pkh's photo
Thu 02/12/09 03:38 AM
very nice

OrangeCat's photo
Thu 02/12/09 03:43 AM
very nice flowerforyou

JasonSB123's photo
Thu 02/12/09 07:30 AM
SWEEEEEEEET!!flowers

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Thu 02/12/09 09:09 AM
Thanks everyone.....I do appreciate the feedback

flowerforyou Flowers for all!!!

((oc)) nice pic!

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Thu 02/12/09 09:19 AM
Awesome write bigsmile

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Thu 02/12/09 02:52 PM

Awesome write bigsmile


Thanks flowerforyou

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Thu 02/12/09 03:18 PM
youve got a way with words, michelleflowerforyou bigsmile