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Baby Blue.
I see thru all the little things you do Through these eyes filled with, empathy and pain I watch as you eagerly choose the path of least resistance. You walk away with swaying hips, glancing back I notice the painted lips You slowly reach out and take self destructions hand. Blindly you follow, letting deceit lead you away You lie in the arms of sabotage drinking nightly of his cheap words disguised as fine wine. Quickly you become embroiled in a life entwined with regrets and denial. Unable to discern one from the other you choose the road to regret |
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For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection.
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For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection. Yes it does, just to bad some have to experience regret. Thanks for your comment. |
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That was excellent . |
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Baby Blue. I see thru all the little things you do Through these eyes filled with, empathy and pain I watch as you eagerly choose the path of least resistance. You walk away with swaying hips, glancing back I notice the painted lips You slowly reach out and take self destructions hand. Blindly you follow, letting deceit lead you away You lie in the arms of sabotage drinking nightly of his cheap words disguised as fine wine. Quickly you become embroiled in a life entwined with regrets and denial. Unable to discern one from the other you choose the road to regret |
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Betty and Flame thank you both for your comments.
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wow - awesome Ron - so many take that path - especially if they become impatient for perfection...
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For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection. Yes it does, just to bad some have to experience regret. Thanks for your comment. |
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wow - awesome Ron - so many take that path - especially if they become impatient for perfection... Deepheart thank you much for the comment and for stopping by. |
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For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection. Yes it does, just to bad some have to experience regret. Thanks for your comment. Yes we would, unfortunatly some haved to learn the hard way. Thanks for stopping by and reading |
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Baby Blue. I see thru all the little things you do Through these eyes filled with, empathy and pain I watch as you eagerly choose the path of least resistance. You walk away with swaying hips, glancing back I notice the painted lips You slowly reach out and take self destructions hand. Blindly you follow, letting deceit lead you away You lie in the arms of sabotage drinking nightly of his cheap words disguised as fine wine. Quickly you become embroiled in a life entwined with regrets and denial. Unable to discern one from the other you choose the road to regret My most favorite piece you've written Ron~raw and intimate, filled with the sorrow of someone in the position of not being able to do a damn thing about a painful situation.... |
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For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection. Sorry wench but but you said it first and it's what i wanted to say Nice write it hits close to home for me. |
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Baby Blue. I see thru all the little things you do Through these eyes filled with, empathy and pain I watch as you eagerly choose the path of least resistance. You walk away with swaying hips, glancing back I notice the painted lips You slowly reach out and take self destructions hand. Blindly you follow, letting deceit lead you away You lie in the arms of sabotage drinking nightly of his cheap words disguised as fine wine. Quickly you become embroiled in a life entwined with regrets and denial. Unable to discern one from the other you choose the road to regret My most favorite piece you've written Ron~raw and intimate, filled with the sorrow of someone in the position of not being able to do a damn thing about a painful situation.... Hey Alicia. Good to see this evening. Sometimes no matter how much we try or want to we just can't do anything about certain situations. They are out of our hands. |
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For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection. Sorry wench but but you said it first and it's what i wanted to say Nice write it hits close to home for me. Hits close to home for many. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment |
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Flame, Carol and iam4u thank you all for stopping by.
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Yes many can relate to this. Frustrating as it may be, life is filled with twist and turns so there is opportunity to right the ship.
Nice piece |
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great write
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