My spanish poems are better but I don't know if I can post in spanish here so here goes one in english (sorry for any errors):

"WHY?"




Why do I find myself

Thinking of you day and night?

Why being around you

Feels always so right?


Why when I see you I always feel

That I know you from before

That the world holds still

And that each day you love me more and more?


Why can I see through your eyes, your soul?

Why when I'm with you I feel complete, I feel whole?

Why do I feel this way when I'm with you?

Why do I feel that you feel this same way too?


Why do I trust you'll never say a lie?

Why do I hurt everytime I see you cry?

Why do I like our hellos more than our goodbyes?

Why do I love to look deeply into your eyes?


Why?

I don't know

And I don't care...

All I know

Is that you are here

And I am there....



By: J.A.P.R.

Lovely, and I bet it sounds even better if someone is telling it to you in Spanish...

I have to admit to being fussy when reading poetry, But this one is brilliant. Pity I don't speak/read Spanish.

I'm so glad you all liked it. I was starting to think my english poetry writing was really bad since I had post this 2 days ago and there were no comments. But now I think I might share a few more here (although, I'm still not sure if I can post some of my spanish ones)

looks like you did a great job to me great poem dude

Thanks everyone!

Is there any way to edit my first post?