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Topic: the darkening
RareEntity Joined Mon 09/01/08 Posts: 23676	Fri 02/06/09 01:01 PM
long has it been to which i have fallen to this level yet on some points it surprises me not the uncertain feeling the sorrow the loneliness i am the treader of paths a foriegner where completion is all around we are not immune to the ravages of the lone path i grow sick of traveling it

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Fri 02/06/09 01:05 PM
I'm loving it...

RareEntity Joined Mon 09/01/08 Posts: 23676	Fri 02/06/09 01:14 PM
cheers

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 02/06/09 03:14 PM
Yet they say the Journey is the Reward Nice work

liltazz Joined Tue 07/29/08 Posts: 217	Fri 02/06/09 03:27 PM
Very nice.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 02/06/09 04:58 PM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 02/07/09 12:29 PM
long has it been to which i have fallen to this level yet on some points it surprises me not the uncertain feeling the sorrow the loneliness i am the treader of paths a foriegner where completion is all around we are not immune to the ravages of the lone path i grow sick of traveling it Share what once was there. Grow through what you cannot see but just feel. Know that MANY have stepped your steps already. Let their betrayals be your friends. Let their spirits lead you to your hiding place. Dream of what needs to be, and live to change what will be. Very NICE thoughts man..and a GOOD write..

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sat 02/07/09 12:34 PM
Good Write!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sat 02/07/09 06:57 PM
Excellent! Great Pic too.

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Sat 02/07/09 07:55 PM
Thought provoking... nice write

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