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Dying Inside
You tell me that you love me I wonder what is wrong The look that's in your eyes Seems to tell a different song. Sure I gave my heart As I freely gave my love Why now all a sudden Does it not seem enough? I sit here in my torture And wait for you each time You never seem to show And there's no reason to your rhyme There's always an excuse As I take the good with bad Yet when I think to leave I keep thinking you'll be back I wished to speak a while But like always you're not there You had to go again I wonder if you care It now has been two months Since I've held you in my arms My tears have long since dried As I now see through your charm I know you have your reasons As do I my dear This time no looking back For my pain outweighs my fear. fadedspirit 10/31/2008 |
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Aww Faded!
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Beautifully written!
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Another great write! Wishing you the VERY best.
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faded-what a heartfelt write
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Dude... Excellent write.
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If a person takes to long to show you their soul.
Then their not living with-in theirs, wink.. I liked this, but then,,I have LIVED it also.. |
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Great Write.
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(((Faded))).
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Aww, thanks LAMom
Thanks for stopping in directandwrite. Aww, thanks colorado97 and welcome to our lil corner of mingle2. Hee hee thanks Mystique. Thanks 1000111010123. Aww, thanks pkd. Thanks Up2Us. Very true iam4u, I'm glad you liked it. Awww, thanks shauna, good to see ya again. Thanks d4tc. Awww, thanks MsTeddyBear! Good to see ya again sweetie. |
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