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Dying Inside
You tell me that you love me I wonder what is wrong The look that's in your eyes Seems to tell a different song. Sure I gave my heart As I freely gave my love Why now all a sudden Does it not seem enough? I sit here in my torture And wait for you each time You never seem to show And there's no reason to your rhyme There's always an excuse As I take the good with bad Yet when I think to leave I keep thinking you'll be back I wished to speak a while But like always you're not there You had to go again I wonder if you care It now has been two months Since I've held you in my arms My tears have long since dried As I now see through your charm I know you have your reasons As do I my dear This time no looking back For my pain outweighs my fear. fadedspirit 10/31/2008 |
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Aww Faded!
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Beautifully written!
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faded-what a heartfelt write
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Dude... Excellent write.
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If a person takes to long to show you their soul.
Then their not living with-in theirs, wink.. I liked this, but then,,I have LIVED it also.. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Great Write.
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(((Faded))).
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Aww, thanks LAMom
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