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" ONCE UPON A TIME IN MANCHESTER "
( THE STORY OF MY LIFE SO FAR ) A long time ago, and during world war two,little Raymond was born,with big eyes of blue. Elsie and Teds new baby boy,he was their second,bundle of joy. It wasn"t long after,his blue eyes,turned green,this was something before,never seen. Five years later he started school,he was never the one for acting the fool. At twelve he moved house,to one with a bath,the old terraced,he came from,was nothing, but a laugh. Three years later,and top of his class,got a job as a draughtsman,and all exams,did pass. Passed his test,and got a motorbike,to go camping afar,but not long after,he was driving a car. Met his beautiful girlfriend,whom he loved,and adored,they married,bought a new house,had five children,a Mech.Engineer now,and worked abroad. She cheated on him, whilst working away,and on the second time,divorced her,on adultery,and sent her away. All the children,went with her,and was left,on his own,but he always loved,the family life,not living alone. At fifty one years,his second partner did meet,she was twenty,but to her,older men,were a treat,had three more children,so now its eight,what a feat. But fourteen years later,it happened again,she cheated,kissed and loved,other men. She told him,the loves,not there anymore,eventually left,took the children,and went out of the door. He"s looking for a partner,again in his life,and if she"s young enough,to have children,this time,make her is wife. His homes for a family,not living alone,and he hopes,he"ll soon have one,instead of being, on his own. RAYMOND.24/01/09 |
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Welcome to the site. Nice write.
My eyes changed from top to bottom from blue to green when I was 2-3 years old |
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" ONCE UPON A TIME IN MANCHESTER " ( THE STORY OF MY LIFE SO FAR ) A long time ago, and during world war two,little Raymond was born,with big eyes of blue. Elsie and Teds new baby boy,he was their second,bundle of joy. It wasn"t long after,his blue eyes,turned green,this was something before,never seen. Five years later he started school,he was never the one for acting the fool. At twelve he moved house,to one with a bath,the old terraced,he came from,was nothing, but a laugh. Three years later,and top of his class,got a job as a draughtsman,and all exams,did pass. Passed his test,and got a motorbike,to go camping afar,but not long after,he was driving a car. Met his beautiful girlfriend,whom he loved,and adored,they married,bought a new house,had five children,a Mech.Engineer now,and worked abroad. She cheated on him, whilst working away,and on the second time,divorced her,on adultery,and sent her away. All the children,went with her,and was left,on his own,but he always loved,the family life,not living alone. At fifty one years,his second partner did meet,she was twenty,but to her,older men,were a treat,had three more children,so now its eight,what a feat. But fourteen years later,it happened again,she cheated,kissed and loved,other men. She told him,the loves,not there anymore,eventually left,took the children,and went out of the door. He"s looking for a partner,again in his life,and if she"s young enough,to have children,this time,make her is wife. His homes for a family,not living alone,and he hopes,he"ll soon have one,instead of being, on his own. RAYMOND.24/01/09 nice |
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THANKS,tanyaann&MirrorMirror
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