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a tear, that is all though my heart has welled with words just a tear. s Much can be learned from words and much can be understood from the path of a single tear... Thank you for your kindness |
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Oh my goodness this is so beautiful, just beautiful... Thank you for this response. It is nice to receive such a compliment |
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The ribs have healed beneath the skin
But the heart protected -- Quietly oh soo quietly beating within. The rhythm not shared nor viewed by others. The ink is still damned --- Blast it all anyway Flow darn you flow Pen of my brother. |
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Very good my friend  if you were a woman i'd blow you a kiss
Thank you for taking the time... and for the refrain...lol |
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Yes,,, Long overdue,,, Awaiting for your soul to sing  
Overdue is an understatement but, I am trying to correct that. |
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She lay still as his finger tips circle and caress her hair. Each stroke releasing the scent of fresh orange blossoms. Tucked up under his arm she can no longer tell where her body ends and his begins. A thought that both excites and saddens her. Her eyes closed, she breaths in rhythm with the rise and fall of his chest. She wonders if he knows. Can he see it in her eyes? That painful longing that screams "I love you ... oh my God I love you"... more than a friend, less than a lover oh how she wants to be his lover. Yet still she lays pretending to be asleep while he caresses her hair and the back of her neck. Her arm tucked under her tingles with the lack of circulation. Breathing in rhythm, eyes closed she silently curses the impending sunrise...
(((Kev))) This is wonderful my friend ... it sent my brain on a bit of a walkabout ... Please come back and write some more 
PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE 
What a perfect response. You are such a gift... Thank you |
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Tender, truthful, raw, soft
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kc, I can not tell you how much I enjoy reading your work. You are truly blessed. Thank you for my brief moments of escape during the day
Meg thank you I appreciate that Very much |
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She lay still as his finger tips circle and caress her hair. Each stroke releasing the scent of fresh orange blossoms. Tucked up under his arm she can no longer tell where her body ends and his begins. A thought that both excites and saddens her. Her eyes closed, she breaths in rhythm with the rise and fall of his chest. She wonders if he knows. Can he see it in her eyes? That painful longing that screams "I love you ... oh my God I love you"... more than a friend, less than a lover oh how she wants to be his lover. Yet still she lays pretending to be asleep while he caresses her hair and the back of her neck. Her arm tucked under her tingles with the lack of circulation. Breathing in rhythm, eyes closed she silently curses the impending sunrise...
(((Kev))) This is wonderful my friend ... it sent my brain on a bit of a walkabout ... Please come back and write some more
PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
What a perfect response. You are such a gift... Thank you xoxoxox |
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Dude you really need to get your a** back here and start writing again. D Ha! I never imagined you would be the one to call me out. Careful what you wish for my brother Well what are friends for if not to remind us Who we are and where we belong. |
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Dude you really need to get your a** back here and start writing again. D Ha! I never imagined you would be the one to call me out. Careful what you wish for my brother Well what are friends for if not to remind us Who we are and where we belong. 
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