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Are you receptive to constructive criticism?
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well since i cant sleep think ill go make some peanut butter cookies
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Are you receptive to constructive criticism? A friendly word is always welcomed 
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well since i cant sleep think ill go make some peanut butter cookies I will be happy to taste test for you 
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well since i cant sleep think ill go make some peanut butter cookies Cookies now I want one 
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Damn I had to go back to page 19 to find something
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Do you want me to use red type and give you a grade for it while I'm at it?
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So not fair, now I wanna go back to page 19 and see what you were looking at!!!!
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Do you want me to use red type and give you a grade for it while I'm at it?
Now what must a student do to become the teachers pet 
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When her eyes came upon him
That monument that she felt was of lust and desire For moments of passion neither words or thoughts can come close to the moment at hand. Experiences of lust should never be harnessed in mere words they should be lived and felt in the heart. She yearned for him as if to take another breath for life. She needed him to feed her inner fire |
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You say that now, but I've had to control my urges to mention spelling and grammar in with my opinion
And I enjoyed the one above 
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Edited by
jimmy99005
on
Wed 01/28/09 01:33 AM
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You say that now, but I've had to control my urges to mention spelling and grammar in with my opinion
And I enjoyed the one above
Hun if I ever get my book done you can be my editor
Come a little closer and I might just use you as inspiration 
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Did I ever mention that everytime I see an edited note that I have a burning desire to know what was written beforehand
Closer hmmmmm, that could be arranged But it'll destracted me from proofing your other poem
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well since i cant sleep think ill go make some peanut butter cookies I will be happy to taste test for you
thanks always good to know if they came out good or not
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well since i cant sleep think ill go make some peanut butter cookies Cookies now I want one
as soon as they are done dear i just put the frist pan in |
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Welcome back Grammy!!!
As long as you promise you didn't use peanutbutter that was tainted with Samonella, I will be glad to taste test
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Welcome back Grammy!!! As long as you promise you didn't use peanutbutter that was tainted with Samonella, I will be glad to taste test
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Did I ever mention that everytime I see an edited note that I have a burning desire to know what was written beforehand
Closer hmmmmm, that could be arranged But it'll destracted me from proofing your other poem
Yes closer
I was thinking we could work on a hole new type of writing |
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You laugh now, but they had 5 outbreaks in Portland of it, and I'm terrified of eating peanutbutter at the moment and it's one of my favorites!!!
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Did I ever mention that everytime I see an edited note that I have a burning desire to know what was written beforehand
Closer hmmmmm, that could be arranged But it'll destracted me from proofing your other poem
Yes closer
I was thinking we could work on a hole new type of writing Let me guess, in Braille? |
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