Hi~! I tried putting as much about myself as I thought was relevant for someone who might be interested in getting to know me. I'm just not sure if it's too much, or not enough...?

Is there anything typical that people say about themselves? What else should I say about myself in my profile?

Thanks~!

Personally, I think you say a little too much about "other things", and not enough about yourself!! JMO!! You should "take out some of the other stuff, and add things you like, music, books, etc.

I think it's fine enough.

It looks good. The only thing I would suggest is maybe going into some detail about what you are looking for other than "a hot Asian boyfriend". Are you looking for someone who does the exact same things as you or someone who does things that you are interested in but haven't done (i.e. skiing, surfing, hiking, computer programming, etc.)

In my opinion, it is better to list what you are looking for rather than what you are not looking for. Some of the profiles I read say things like, "If you a Republican take a hike, looking for a one night stand then get lost, etc." It comes off as being *****y in my opinion and is a huge turn off. Just my two cents.

You could always put a poem you wrote or something like that on your profile