Topic: please rate any of my poems
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Wed 01/14/09 10:05 AM
1

if i knew you and you knew me..
we'd walk down to the golden sea,
to watch the everlasting light
until it driven in the night.

we'd walk an walk, just you an me
until we'd come to a tree,
and there we'd sot and rest awhile
to look about and laugh an smile
we'd talk about so many things..
the way life that goodnes brings,
the wonder that our hearts agree
if i knew you, and you knew me.



2

i give you my love more preshes than money,
i give you myself before preaching or law,
well you gave me yourself, will you come
travel wirth me? Shall we stick by
each other as long as we live?

3
a lil tree,
a lil brook,
a lil walk,
i never took,

a lil moon,
a lil sky,
a bluebird sings
from way up high.


Alil love
a lil hate
though i've found both
i still will wait

when i find love both sweet an true
that last for evermore
that walk then i shall surwly take
with the one i adore

alil time
alot of time
although i wait, i do not mind



4

when girls look into a mirror, they look with blind eyes
they only see their reflection rather than what matters the most. they're the only one who can judge them.
why should they care about what other people opinions?

5
if i was to leave tomorrow
would their be a memory that
sticks out, Or
a cry unheard?
a thought unsaid?
a heart once whole?

an when i'm gone dont be
sad, i'll be a memory
for when i go an you'll know
you're standing over my grave
with those dead roses no-one gave
an everyone cry's when they should rejoice

so here i am
and this is me
sit by my grave
and talk to me
together now
we are again
as we talk of love
that could have been

thanks for being a friend....


6

why did you have to forsake me
couldnt you tell me goodbye
i've been waking up lately with tears in my eyes love aint worth making when it makes me the fool
a chance aint worth taking
my heart is breaking
when he's holding you
you dont even know how happy you make me
love aint worth making
when he holding you
so pick up what we shared
i know his arms are waiting to hold you
you're leaving me lonlyy tonight
love aint worth making when it makes me the fool
a chance aint worth taking
my heart is breaking
when he's holding you
Cause i never took a
chance on you.....