Topic: MY TRUE SOUL-MATE
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Sun 01/11/09 09:39 AM
MY TRUE SOUL -MATE

As my core is my "HEART",I don"t give it freely anymore.
The danger line is "FALLING IN LOVE TOO EASY",I"ve done this only twice before.
In the darkness I see "HOPE",for number three. It could be you.
Truth and lies are my "CONSCIENCE",and hope moral sense shines through.
"UNCERTAINTY",is always reflected,will the next lover be sincere.
"PASSION",is not to be played with,cos "YOU",are fiery desire.
To sacrifice myself again,as I have done of late,
You would have to be my love for life,my "TRUE SOUL MATE".

RAYMOND 25/12/2008

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Sun 01/11/09 09:43 AM

MY TRUE SOUL -MATE

As my core is my "HEART",I don"t give it freely anymore.
The danger line is "FALLING IN LOVE TOO EASY",I"ve done this only twice before.
In the darkness I see "HOPE",for number three. It could be you.
Truth and lies are my "CONSCIENCE",and hope moral sense shines through.
"UNCERTAINTY",is always reflected,will the next lover be sincere.
"PASSION",is not to be played with,cos "YOU",are fiery desire.
To sacrifice myself again,as I have done of late,
You would have to be my love for life,my "TRUE SOUL MATE".

RAYMOND 25/12/2008


I find all that capitalization extremely distracting.

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Sun 01/11/09 09:56 AM
Mswizard,sorry,but I will explain..
on another site in U.K.a lady wrote a poem and it was on her profile.
she said anyone who can answer her question she would reply.This was my answer and i had to highlight her main points,she loved it.

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Sun 01/11/09 10:37 AM
nice write and welcome

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Sun 01/11/09 10:46 AM
thanks PKH,There are more to come,I post 1-per day.

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Sun 01/11/09 05:25 PM
Smart, I hate that I didnt understand it until you explainedflowerforyou

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Sun 01/11/09 05:50 PM
Great thoughts and heart...and your caps look like MINE...
But TRUST ME,,,most people HERE,,HATE the USE of such BAD GRAMMAR...:wink:
As for me,,I have been here LONGER than them and I have ALWAYS TYPED my way..lol,lol
Proper English looks odd to me....noway

Have fun on these pages, and over-look some small rages.
But keep it real, is our deal...
Just be you,,and friends will find YOU!:banana: