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i wrote this a few months ago when i wasnt feeling to good.
what is it im doing wrong? why have i been alone so long. i really wish i knew, what it is i have to do. somtimes i think i'll always be lonely, do women think that i am a phoney? i dont know why i cant find love, is it because i cant do enough? god damn i try with all my might, but no one seems to give a ****e. the only ones who care are freinds, my love hunt will never end. i see women on the news, who's partners beat them black and blue. then theres me who would never do that, who can give them what they wished they had. why's it me who gets bad luck? am i better off giving up? if your there please find me, and show you what love really means. |
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Nice poem Welsh give it time... you will find each other!
I believe there is someone out there for everyone... |
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im with u welsh..seems that way doesnt it? im about to give up..i always
pick the wrong men..always..what am i doing wrong? im to the point where i dont give a **** anymore, so |
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I looked at your profile, and you have some wonderful testimonials.
Great friends and those to whom you can talk to. We all get lonely, and to be able to write it down and let your soul do it for you is a gift. You'll find her, or she you. |
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thanks ladies for your replies, i write alot of poems and i saw this
thread so i thought id share some of them. they have been written when i was at my lowest points, i found that getting it all out on paper helped alot. |
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I hear you and I feel your words my friend.
I have no doubt you will find each other when the time is right. In the meantime, a life rich in friendships is wonderful indeed! I am glad you are one of mine. |
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thanks sherrie, and it makes me happy knowing i have freinds like you
hun! |
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this is the first poem i ever wrote, it in no way represents how im
feeling now tho. when i wrote it it was the worst part of my life and it just came out. one day one day hopefully not too long, my life will end and ill be gone. i feel so lonely late at night, i cry out loud with all my might. i know ill never get a girl, to love me just like ill love her. i wish i could meet the perfect lass, who dosnt want me just for cash. nearly every girl that ive been with, has gone behind my back the div! one day when im old ill groan, about how im still all on my own. the girls i see everywhere, just walk past like im not there! one day maybe i suppose, ill come accross my shining rose. and when i do you'll see my pride, and tears of joy i cannot hide. when she's here she'll fit the part, the peice that mends my broken heart. |
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J I still think you're A Hell
Of a guy and friend ... The right Person will come along for you No need to look for her ... She'll find ya bro *hugs* |
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One day the right woman will see what a nice guy you are--(you seem to
be a nice guy I haven't gotten to talk to you). Can't let it get you down, believe me I know how that is. Keep smiling and may your dreams come true! |
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