Topic: Room for improvement. tell me what you think! | |
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Yep no one is perfect... so explaian away my faults!! well don't shatter my ego or anything... but lets get some constructive criticism... yes yes? oui oui? tres bien'!!
Be gentle though... i'm fragile!! HA!! not really. I like a little sass. so hit me with your best comliment or criticism. or not... >.> |
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I like your profile. It's interesting. But..I don't care for the second photo.
Have fun and good luck. |
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ty yeah that was me goofing around while working on my cousin's car. i took it off though... i was a little aprehensive about putting that one on in the first place. i was a tidly bit covered in engine greese. lol I am trying to get some new ones up here in the near future.
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While it sounds a little hyper and intricate I actually like this profile and give it a very high score for individuality and personality. If you read it carefully a lot comes through even with the humor.
The Lead photo is Excellent. It immediately addresses your physique and that you are bald but focuses on your muscular and lean body in a way that is not cheezy. It relates an interest that can be shared in a dateing situation. The lighting is excellent and downplays distracting background. And so is the far right one. It is clear who you are in the group photo and you are smart enough not to put the competition ie a female in your pictures. Ditch the two center ones they crash the overall upbeat and engageing tone of the other two. Crop and enlarge the headshot out of the right photo it would be good as a third photo. The more photos of you the more responses. Maybe a picture of you hitting the books. Definitely pictures with color. Addressing that you are a full time student is excellent because it does counteract the suggestion in your text that you lack focus and minimal info on career. Probably not a bad idea to tell that you also work but since I would Not advertise exactly what being self-employed means on the web (except that it is legal) was wise. Encourage you to jump in the forums and think you should do well on Mingle. You are young and smoke are the only serious strikes against you if you ditch the center photos. Good Luck. Welcome to the playpen. |
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ty for the imput. i got rid of the 2 middle ones... but i am rather ashamed to admit it... but i am pretty much a photoshop... ahhh... moron... yes that and i don't have the software atm. i'm not computer illiterate, but i definately am not photoshop literate.
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