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jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 01/05/09 03:19 PM Edited by jimz on Mon 01/05/09 03:22 PM
add me in flour chop in green apples wiz in rock n roll i need to be blended my stubborness smells like sour milk and is hard as water throw in rose petals for the living dead sometimes in this bullshiit its the only wave open up the fishes without killing them if you cant do this get the f(u)ck out of the sundrum stay and stir stay and stir stay and stir you will do this a very very long time take me out of the oven drain the sun and it will stay long er help you all screwed it up help will come if you will leave and take with you my broken paradise bones sicilia fogged hair of a dogs tongue take yourself to the abyss and bathe and shave do something with the oil drums melting spilling in my sea eyes havent you heard a revol ution is com ming havent you heard the dogs talking

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 01/05/09 03:48 PM
Hi Jim,always amazing

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 01/05/09 04:21 PM
(((Jimmy))) always stirring up the pot

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 01/05/09 04:29 PM
(((Jimmy))) always stirring up the pot or in this case maybe smoking it... j/k jim i liked this write

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 01/05/09 04:48 PM
(((Jimmy))) always stirring up the pot or in this case maybe smoking it... j/k jim i liked this write youre both write i mean right signed anymonous

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 01/05/09 05:08 PM
add me in flour chop in green apples wiz in rock n roll i need to be blended my stubborness smells like sour milk and is hard as water throw in rose petals for the living dead sometimes in this bullshiit its the only wave open up the fishes without killing them if you cant do this get the f(u)ck out of the sundrum stay and stir stay and stir stay and stir you will do this a very very long time take me out of the oven drain the sun and it will stay long er help you all screwed it up help will come if you will leave and take with you my broken paradise bones sicilia fogged hair of a dogs tongue take yourself to the abyss and bathe and shave do something with the oil drums melting spilling in my sea eyes havent you heard a revol ution is com ming havent you heard the dogs talking I love this. It's very I Never Promised You a Rose Garden-ish!

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 01/05/09 05:13 PM
add me in flour chop in green apples wiz in rock n roll i need to be blended my stubborness smells like sour milk and is hard as water throw in rose petals for the living dead sometimes in this bullshiit its the only wave open up the fishes without killing them if you cant do this get the f(u)ck out of the sundrum stay and stir stay and stir stay and stir you will do this a very very long time take me out of the oven drain the sun and it will stay long er help you all screwed it up help will come if you will leave and take with you my broken paradise bones sicilia fogged hair of a dogs tongue take yourself to the abyss and bathe and shave do something with the oil drums melting spilling in my sea eyes havent you heard a revol ution is com ming havent you heard the dogs talking I love this. It's very I Never Promised You a Rose Garden-ish! sweet, I love your comments, you being published and all peace

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 01/05/09 06:26 PM
Excellent!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 01/05/09 06:56 PM
Good write! (((Jimmy))) :flower:

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 01/05/09 06:57 PM
Good write! (((Jimmy))) :flower: what is this, reunion night!

aries43 Joined Sun 11/02/08 Posts: 68	Mon 01/05/09 07:58 PM
nice,.. though I'm not surprised any,(that what you write will be good)