Topic: Untitled Poems
nlas's photo
Mon 01/05/09 02:35 PM
Tropical paradise
Sand beneath my toes
I look off and wonder
What random set of circumstances
Are going to shape my future.
Petulant thoughts
and summer swelter
Surrounding my being with doubt.
Sweat pours down my curved body
Pockets of unattractiveness
and numerous logs of failure
piercing my soul


Looking down the road
A year long hesitation
Building anticipation
For a future long and bright.
Patience I must preach...
Calamity, however, I feel.
Spiteful, I am...
Of the world and of myself
Keeping back from improving
a negative mindset.
Hold on,
lazyness calling.






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Mon 01/05/09 02:36 PM
not bad dood

d4tc's photo
Mon 01/05/09 02:43 PM
Cool! drinker

nlas's photo
Mon 01/05/09 02:58 PM
Thanks

pkh's photo
Mon 01/05/09 04:02 PM
that was a good write,no more negative.keep up the good work

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Mon 01/05/09 04:11 PM
very niceflowers flowers