Topic: LOST IN A BIG BIG WORLD
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Sun 01/04/09 11:01 AM
Here is a lil part of a poem I made up dont know how good it is but it explains just how i feel sometimes when i feel so lost and cant find my way...I hope yall like it if not sorry i have tried to make it something yall would like to read...

Here I am lost in this big big world..Wondering where I fit in in this big world..I keep my head held up high looking and trying to fit in in this big big world..Someday I might find out where i just fit in this world..I am so lost trying to find my way in this big big world..Just as I think I have found a way to fit in this big world someone comes along and brings me down in this big big world..I pick myself up and try once again for I am not going to give up for I just might find my spot in this big big world..I can see the rainbow shining so bright with all the beautiful colors just in my reach..I have a goal to reach out to grasp my rainbow and finally find my spot in such a beautiful big world..til then I will keep trying and maybe some time soon I will have my place in this big big world....


By Shannon
(A.K.A.) sASFIRE75

P.S.
I hope you enjoyed this poem..not my best yet but i try

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Sun 01/04/09 11:07 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 01/04/09 11:12 AM
Ty for your post Kim

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Sun 01/04/09 11:13 AM

Ty for your post Kim
Thank you for the writeflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 01/04/09 12:06 PM
thanks for sharingflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 01/04/09 12:40 PM
Ty pkd for posting

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Sun 01/04/09 12:48 PM
I know how you feel Sas, keep your chin up girl, one never knows what the future holds..

Your friend always
Danielflowerforyou

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Sun 01/04/09 01:00 PM
Edited by sasfire75 on Sun 01/04/09 01:07 PM
Ty Danielson and it is just getting harder to keep my chin up..lol

Your friend Always,
Shannon

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Sun 01/04/09 01:04 PM

Ty Danielson and i am just getting hard..lol

Your friend Always,
Shannon


awww, you know you are welcome..
:smile:

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Sun 01/04/09 01:18 PM
Your the best my dear dear danielson..lol I am so lucky to have a friend in you sweetie

Your Friend always and Forever,
Shannon

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Sun 01/04/09 01:19 PM

Ty Danielson and it is just getting harder to keep my chin up..lol

Your friend Always,
Shannon


I know, it gets that way for all of us, I think I will post one of my old poems, maybe that will help you and me too, and possibly a few others..

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Sun 01/04/09 01:30 PM
Very true Danielson it just might help us and others...I love seeing your poems..Especailly the ones you write for me or about me...I love seeing just how much more you know about me..It feels like you are actually here on a everyday basis and know my moods and how I feel from day to day...

Your Friend Always & Forever,
Shannon