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Why Does Darkness Look So Beautiful?
I knew something was wrong that rainy day I opened my heart. Everywhere I looked I saw bats instead of doves. I began to ask myself . . . Why does darkness look so beautiful? While looking in the mirror at my heart pulsing I realized my blood was no longer red and turning a tainted hue of black. I felt a cold chill in the air instantly frost biting my soul Maybe I forgot to close the freezer door – No wait, I turned around – it was her. Why does darkness look so beautiful? I thought it was cold in here, I told her, Did you know it makes me feel like standing in a morgue when you’re near me? She seemed lost for words Then she began to speak to me Her lips, sounding like velcro slowly being pulled apart as she spewed deceitful words Part of me was paralyzed by her presence I faced my demon, walked away, and wondered. . . Why does darkness look so beautiful? I thought I heard music, a harpsichord maybe? No, it was her cell, she was texting again. It became perceptible everything about her sounds or looks evil. Dark eyes that cry blood because her soul doesn’t know what tears are. Sleeping means resting on a bed of ice as your body heat thaws the surface you rest on Only then, you’re reminded of her pain as buried blades begin to impale my flesh where I lay. At last I walked away not resting never to look at her fury again Why does darkness look so beautiful? I guess I always knew - it just hurts. META4 -120108 Raymond M. Fournier |
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Very touching and emotional. You can feel the pain, the suffering and the strength it took to walk away. I really like this one!
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nice write
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we view darkness as forbidden...danger entices and ultimately is our demise...you created such vibrant images
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