Topic: Eating My Heart (eyes)
d4tc's photo
Wed 12/24/08 10:11 PM
Have me
anyway you want me
toy with me
joy with me
eat with me
sleep with me
walk with me
talk with me
do something
with me
hit me
go ahead
i said
hit me
knock some
new sense
into me
nonsense
caused by
a girl
who hates poetry
tie loosening
my eyes too
used to things
I
hate this shirt
tucked out
i
love this girls
passion for hate
without a doubt
firm stern
such wrong words
so strong in natures
i hate her poetry
acted out in real life
the take backs
and second chances
diamond backs
in saddle stances
devo whips me
pretty good i might add
add up a few more years
subtracted by a few more
wrong doings findings
i cannot live without
the poetry
it holds the key
to my heart
too bad
her stab
cut a part
of that out

2Btrue2One's photo
Wed 12/24/08 11:40 PM
Interesting, good poemdrinker

Iwant2cusmile's photo
Wed 12/24/08 11:54 PM
nice plenty of though in it. drinker