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Topic: My Beautiful Place
1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Sun 12/07/08 11:18 AM
Like the hurricane you came, and in the aftermath lay the Advent... My Beautiful Place. I knew...I knew...I knew... and even though the experience was new, I knew you... My Beautiful Place. Doubt...pout...frout... from my nadir to my zenith up north, nay not south... My Beautiful Place. Immiscible as the oily residue of my complexities are to your revitalizing waters... still I bathe free... My Beautiful Place. Creature of heaven... resident of the clouds... Manna.... oh how I love thee .... My Beautiful Place. Anachronicity... Finality... Mortality... I’m creature of earth... Man.... oh how I erred thee.... My Beautiful Place.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Sun 12/07/08 11:37 AM


darkowl1 Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 13060	Sun 12/07/08 11:39 AM
very nice poem! your call name kills me though

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sun 12/07/08 11:42 AM
Your poem begs the eternal question-why we do what we do. Beautiful places are meant to be cherished and held within

LadyMartha Joined Thu 10/30/08 Posts: 626	Sun 12/07/08 11:48 AM
nice poem but your name makes me want to eat some steak

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 12/07/08 05:03 PM
Like the hurricane you came, and in the aftermath lay the Advent... My Beautiful Place. I knew...I knew...I knew... and even though the experience was new, I knew you... My Beautiful Place. Doubt...pout...frout... from my nadir to my zenith up north, nay not south... My Beautiful Place. Immiscible as the oily residue of my complexities are to your revitalizing waters... still I bathe free... My Beautiful Place. Creature of heaven... resident of the clouds... Manna.... oh how I love thee .... My Beautiful Place. Anachronicity... Finality... Mortality... I’m creature of earth... Man.... oh how I erred thee.... My Beautiful Place. I know your Beautiful Place well. And you are correct. She is indeed, a beautiful place~

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 12/08/08 12:21 PM
Yes...your beautiful place...

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 12/08/08 05:10 PM


Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 12/08/08 08:51 PM
welcome to the poetry section! nice write

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Mon 12/08/08 09:05 PM
Yes...your beautiful place... You are indeed Lovely piece for a lovely lady there Prime

1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 09:43 PM
thank u much

1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 09:45 PM
lol....u know...the name was an exercise in jest, thanks for liking the write...

1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 09:46 PM
............. indeed..............

1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 09:54 PM
.... we're doing a Jamaican style B-B-Q... Angel is cooking...come over.... thanks for the compliment concerning the write

1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 09:57 PM
..... you don't know the half of it.... lol..... thank you 4 the vote of confidence

1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 09:58 PM
....... if u had my eyes.....

1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 09:58 PM


1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 09:59 PM
thank u much..

1PrimeUSDABeefcake Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 72	Fri 12/12/08 10:00 PM
.... thank u very much... i appreciate the kind words...