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Topic: The Mirage
jeanc200358 Joined Fri 02/02/07 Posts: 3183	Wed 04/11/07 06:11 PM
The Mirage He is in many ways like a mirage I can see him off in the distance My ever-elusive oasis The one who will give me sustenance And finally quench this never-ending thirst. The closer I get to him The clearer he becomes Until he’s within arm’s reach Then he fades into nothing. As the sun begins to set just over the horizon He appears once again For a moment I’m excited Then reality sets in And I can’t help but wonder Is he just another mirage?

stew Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 288	Wed 04/11/07 06:18 PM
Awesome! Hiya hun

jeanc200358 Joined Fri 02/02/07 Posts: 3183	Wed 04/11/07 06:20 PM
thank you And hello back.

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Wed 04/11/07 06:21 PM
Very well written. Very nice.

sillysammie Joined Wed 03/28/07 Posts: 29	Wed 04/11/07 06:27 PM
i like this!

EmotionalTurbulance Joined Thu 04/05/07 Posts: 1422	Wed 04/11/07 07:08 PM
sheila, i enjoyed that, hon. =0)

jeanc200358 Joined Fri 02/02/07 Posts: 3183	Wed 04/11/07 07:55 PM
thanks...i haven't written anything in many years. Just kinda came to me all of a sudden.

EmotionalTurbulance Joined Thu 04/05/07 Posts: 1422	Wed 04/11/07 08:00 PM
glad you did

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