your always on my mind no matter where you are, i hear your voice and those little whispers so loud as can be, i know your not here in general on this earth, as your above the heavens with your angels guiding you with all your might. i can no longer walk with you hand in hand but watching the butterflys with a tear in your eyes seem to be impossible to erase you from my mind.as each one of stand alone in a time of need and only wishing you were there.

I like it, but i would properly put it like this instead, just an opinion. don't take offence because it is very nicely written.


your always on my mind no matter where you are,
i hear your voice and those little whispers so loud as can be,
i know your not here in general on this earth as your above the heavens,
with your angels guiding you with all your might.
i can no longer walk with you hand in hand
but watching the butterflys with a tear in your eyes
seem to be impossible to erase you from my mind.
as each one of stand alone in a time of need
and only wishing you were there.

well like i said again keep it to yourself. or email me instead

Some things, some people are never meant to be erased for our minds.....Lovely write!