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Frustrated I am
Unknowns hold us Captive to a time A place, reunited The spot in the movie Rewound over and over Comfortable, but for A moment. Short story perfect But a novel We never make With but one take There's no perfection Only recollection of The half steps, the Missteps, the Stepping backwards Off the ledge Free falling And then The director Shouts cut. |
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Wow, P, this is an incredible write...you are so clear, immediate and direct...
Love to you and your precious heart  
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thanks for flowers MisKim- I need them-it's a dreary day here. 
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magnificant lovely one
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Wow, P, this is an incredible write...you are so clear, immediate and direct... Love to you and your precious heart
Thanks J- you are too kind
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Tragic, this time we cannot just blink away.
Fulfilling in its depths of passions and sway. Yet untold in its clarity of prologue, still capatulating.
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you are too cool, thanks 
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magnificant lovely one
thanks mom- pondering on this snowy day
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Tragic, this time we cannot just blink away.
Fulfilling in its depths of passions and sway. Yet untold in its clarity of prologue, still capatulating.
You are most kind Terry- have a wonderful Sunday!!
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Frustrated I am Unknowns hold us Captive to a time A place, reunited The spot in the movie Rewound over and over Comfortable, but for A moment. Short story perfect But a novel We never make With but one take There's no perfection Only recollection of The half steps, the Missteps, the Stepping backwards Off the ledge Free falling And then The director Shouts cut. Ha! VERY clever metaphor and you know I love my metaphors!
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Frustrated I am Unknowns hold us Captive to a time A place, reunited The spot in the movie Rewound over and over Comfortable, but for A moment. Short story perfect But a novel We never make With but one take There's no perfection Only recollection of The half steps, the Missteps, the Stepping backwards Off the ledge Free falling And then The director Shouts cut. Ha! VERY clever metaphor and you know I love my metaphors!
clever from you is a great compliment Ms Wiz
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sweet
talent!
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very nicely done...perhaps we should all own parachutes...or perhaps thats what friends are for...????
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sweet talent!
(((Jimmy))) |
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very nicely done...perhaps we should all own parachutes...or perhaps thats what friends are for...????
perhaps a club of sorts is in order-let's all land in a grassy field and have a picnic with our friends. Thanks for posting kc 
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Ahhh pkd..simply magnificent my friend
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Ahhh pkd..simply magnificent my friend
thank you kindly - smiles all around
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these directors always intercepted the wrong time, nice write
Frustrated I am Unknowns hold us Captive to a time A place, reunited The spot in the movie Rewound over and over Comfortable, but for A moment. Short story perfect But a novel We never make With but one take There's no perfection Only recollection of The half steps, the Missteps, the Stepping backwards Off the ledge Free falling And then The director Shouts cut. |
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