Butterfly kisses on closed eyes
Wandering hands silken thighs
The air reverberates
with delighted cries as
Liquid passions flow
in a warm velvet night
and we lay silently
segregated
in the aftermath
Listening
to the
Echoes
of our lies …

Some Echo's leave me with Tears

Damn, a whole lotta heat doused with cold reality!

Almost like riding a mini-roller coaster!

Very nice, mswizard!! I love it! Thanx for sharing!!

I always love the eroticism you bring
Ms. Wiz

Great Write.

great write- isn't it ironic we can fool ourselves for for the sake of passion knowing what we wish for will never be

Same here my friend

Yep. Exactly. Life IS a roller coaster dont you think?

Thank you sweetpea

Thank you d

There's no doubt about it. Sigh.

Nice sweetheart, nice!!!

Oh there's my girl!!

a roller coaster or a food critic, not sure which fits better.

Hiya sweets, how's you except for the same old damn heartbreaks, same, same, damit.
We women, have a fight, each day and every night, we sit and pray
for what, when, how, why, we cry, and say, "oh god here it comes again", lovin, leaving it's all the same, same, feels like a god damn game, to them...love ya loads and you're never forgotten, I read all of you! I pray for you to have one so true, but time, ya time, and it's something sometimes we haven't got enough of.

I remember when we where younger it was so much easier, the men, rather boys
weren't such sticks in the mud!

You are welcome!!

A great write Ms Wiz

Thank you BonnyGirl

It started so happy and ended sad.. i still loved it but i wish it would've had a happier ending like holding each other till they fell asleep

Unfortunately the truth ain't always pretty my friend